Wait, why is Bruce a weak ass man here, in planet hulk he and him were actually helping each other and it became even more as they had caiera and son and Bruce was speaking full sentences not hulk this, hulk that.

Is this hulk a Bana version

One problem I have. His Full name is Robert Bruce Banner
Not David Bruce Banner. David is the name given to him by that horrible 1970s live action show

I fail to see what the consequences were here. Yang never got called out for being the one who caused the conflict to begin with. If anything everyone got off Scott free.

Wow, not even gonna apologize for hitting him with a huge piece of concrete for no reason. I see how this is.

Hope no one was hurt by the spaceship/that building was well insured. ;3

Finally Jaune woke up his semblance.

maybe you could potentially introduce the other hulks if you're going with the immortal hulk route or something similar i think you're gonna go for with summer and bruce

That's fine. Take your time in posting chapters. This happens alot so no need to worry . Just toss care of "adulting."

excellent work on this chapter and welcome back also nice touch with that ghost

I really hope that this book is not dead. I would love for this book to continue. It is an amazing story filled to the brim with action, heart, and great story telling. Please continue this book.

Amazing fanfic and hope to see more in the future

why not whilst hulk stays in banner grey hulk could be battling to come out, green hulk holds him back but the grey hulk eventually comes out, or maybe you could do something where bruce forces himself to transform and he turns into grey hulk

General Thunderbolt Ross the Red Hulk could appear in Remnant to ally with villains

The dialogue is too stilted. It's as if someone made last-minute changes to the original script and the actors weren't informed. Put simply, the dialogue you added didn't mesh well with the canon dialogue. The lines just didn't flow naturally into one another.