Continue and update please Harry learn how create wards and other magic with magic golems and other magic defenses stop falls of settlements for some more.

I have been betrayed by close ones...boom dimension jump meet the first guy I trust you wth my secrets . bam...plot twist.. meh more like sheer stupidity

Question for chapter 6, Moon flower seems rare so rather then waste it on the potion at the current time why did he not take clippings with the intent with the intent to grow more?

Wow! This story is hideous.
It's like the author took everything wrong with a fanfiction and stuffed them together into a single chapter.
How the hell can anyone stand to read this pile of crap is beyond me.
Dropping this shit immediately before my IQ falls any lower.

$20 on the thunderbird.
Great story and I can't wait to see werevits heading.
Don't kill yourself in presser

Only one thing to say more more more!

500 on the dragon

Im stopping here as it feels like a good ending point as you only have three more chapters written and you did not finish.

I have to admit that i feel you mess around a bit about harry's power level especially as he is meant to have twice the power of cinder.

Im not 100% sure where you where going with this thou i will have to say it dues feel like you forced some of the events from cannon to happen in this story even thou i find it very strange.

Another thing i feel that you seem to not think how harry would have used the knowledge he has to help add to the protection on beacon (like the pond or even how he hid neo's room) harry would have made sure to add stuff like that as he knows the danger can also come from anywhere.

Another thing HOW did he not catch cinders and her lot at beacon or the tournament? Bit of a big plot hole.

That all being said it's a shame you did not finish this story.

The fight does not make very much sense. You said that Harry has slightly more magic than a full Maiden. So how can he be faster exhausted than Cinder when he fights 2 on 1 with Ozpin against her?. I mean he didn't even use much magic at all. Only his semblance.

Great fic can't wait to see the next chapter

He pulled a Raiden

The blame of the hatred towards the Schnee in Remnant is justified because of the actions of Jacques.

The White Fang in the story can’t be forgiven or condoned on their actions even when compared to the people of his world so Weiss has a right to feel hatred towards them.

This is explained in the heinous actions of Adam that makes this group resemble the Klu Klux Clan.

The pairing looks excellent with Pyrrha but she has a tragic death in the story.

Pretty much no conflict and every character was rather flat and one dimensional. Next time, if you want to keep readers' attention, you might want to slow down and actually flesh out your story and characters.