Reviews for The Unfortunate Effects of Electricity on the Human Body
Guest chapter 3 . 4/29/2019
OH MY GOD I CANT FREAKING BREATHE ALL THE SUPERHEROES JUST LIKE “NOPE YOU AINT GETTIN OUT TONIGHT BOI”
Death Fury chapter 5 . 7/26/2018
this is in code
Guest chapter 4 . 7/26/2018
Ya paso un año y sigo esperando qwq
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 3 . 11/12/2016
Haha, loved it :D Peter is such a character :P
bellekitten chapter 3 . 9/6/2016
Could you involve the agents of S.M.A.S.H please?
MagicWarriorDragon chapter 3 . 7/29/2016
I love spidey and I need more of him just like I need more Flash. I love this! Update soon! Injured!Spidey is great. (The more you torture a character, the more it means you love them!)
Guest of honor chapter 3 . 7/5/2016
I love the relationship between Matt and Peter and I love peters stubborness. It's hilarious! And I really want to see that story of when Matt gets shot. Please update soon so we can see more chapters of Spider-Man with other heros!
Melancholy's Sunshine chapter 3 . 7/5/2016
Why do I feel like Spider-Man watching in the medical area becomes a punishment for doctors who say it's an easy job? Or just being jerks in general? Or maybe a key part to being an "official" SHIELD Doctor.
Now, odd idea, but does Peter know how to contact Deadpool, because I could see him offering to buy him tacos or something in exchange for escape and that in and of itself would be pure chaos.
Death Fury chapter 3 . 7/4/2016
good chapter please update soon!
Death Fury chapter 2 . 6/25/2016
good chapter, update soon please
Guest of honor chapter 2 . 6/25/2016
Please update soon! This is really good and I want to read more!
Melancholy's Sunshine chapter 2 . 6/25/2016
Aw. And no one was around to embarrass him. Or baby him. Still loving this.
Melancholy's Sunshine chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
Very nice. Very nice.
If you ever decided to add anything to this jewel, Might I make a suggestion?
Peter was on heavy mess when he revealed his identity. He can be panicky, then calm down when he realizes it's fine.
You can have Tony, Mr. I-Will-Learn-All-Your-Secrets-Because-I'm-Iron-Man-Stark, be irritated because some random Doctor learned the arachnid's identity before he did. A big blow considering they wanted him to be an Avenger.
Or perhaps Peter thinks he is recovered before the doctors give the okay and various heroes help keep him in the Med Bay?
All in all, it is up to you.
Death Fury chapter 1 . 6/12/2016
good story, maybe you could add a chapter to it?
Guest of honor chapter 1 . 6/12/2016
I loved the story, my favorite was high Peter. They gave him the good stuff right there. Please continue this story! I really what to see other chapters that has to do with Peter and the medical staff!
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