| Reviews for M for Mature |
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  imonly7 chapter 1 . 5/10/2019 I really enjoyed this while me and my sister were naked and I peed white sticky stuff in her no no zone. |
 sahdah chapter 5 . 12/8/2016 *delicately dabs a kerchief to my forehead* holy smoke balls that was intense. SE 69... *_* woooo You write so well! Seriously, tho, what was Maka thinking as she takes him by the tongue?! |
| PandasAtIHOP chapter 5 . 11/28/2016 They just keep getting better and better. Had to wait a bit for this one but it's fine. So worth it! |
| Silly Twin Stars chapter 4 . 9/3/2016 BRING ON THE SEQUEL. This was sexy and fun and your descriptions are great and I could imagine everything perfectly! I've seen someone write this about you before, can't remember where, but I agree with them: your voice in your writing is so clear and accessible and it makes for such a smooth, enjoyable read... even when it's smut and I'm sitting here fanning myself. ;D Loved it! |
| sahdah chapter 4 . 8/10/2016 I love that she's dancing mostly to her own drum. I've said it before, I'll say out again- this chapter had a whole lotta wowza! I like the hint of take charge Soul at the end. Really these two, I love 'em. Nicely done. |
| makapedia chapter 4 . 8/10/2016 (degdeg) pls tie her up |
| sahdah chapter 3 . 8/9/2016 Omg you didn't! Black Star, you cock blocking bastard. Lmfao. "Hey man I gotta show you this Pokemon Go meme!" I'm dying. This was great, nicely done! |
| Sadderdaze chapter 3 . 8/9/2016 Pokemon Go? Canoodle in my presence? ... THIS WAS JUST TOO FUNNY! |
| sahdah chapter 2 . 6/22/2016 This was well written. How does one objectively review smut? The writing pace was great, the scene wasn't rushed. Characterization, on point. Consentual rough smuttiness very nicely done. Way to go! |
| Sadderdaze chapter 2 . 6/21/2016 Yessss! MORE I WANT MORE! |
| Sadderdaze chapter 1 . 6/18/2016 Exactly what I needed at 2:30am... |
| Missy 63 chapter 1 . 6/16/2016 Please tell me you are continuing this! I LOVE this ship, and this TOTALLY highlights how it should be! |
| sahdah chapter 1 . 6/15/2016 What do you mean someday? Because this deff earned the nose-tip finger tap. Hot stuff, check. Nicely done! |
| dreckllyn chapter 1 . 6/15/2016 this fuels me so much. i love your word choice, it seems very careful and deliberate and im just over here drooling over it. characterization was on point, smut was on point, thank you for this gift. |
| makapedia chapter 1 . 6/15/2016 THIS IS SO WELL DONE SHHhHHH I love how Soul is just so content to get her off and then cuddle but then Maka is just NO, YOU GET YOURS TOO. (he lasts a whole 2 minutes) |
