Reviews for Eclipse |
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bookworm050905 chapter 15 . 4/9 the story is soooooo good. pleaseee rewrite/continue it |
Meistar chapter 11 . 8/13/2018 Rewrite this! I miss you, and your writing! |
Izzybella12 chapter 15 . 3/16/2018 Well. I can't say I didn't see this coming. |
Meistar chapter 15 . 3/13/2018 WWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTT? This story is amazing. Ure, it could have some improvements: but the plot is amazing and your writing is fantastic! Please at least rewrite it. Please. |
Reaper362 chapter 15 . 3/13/2018 A pity that your not continuing this story i generally enjoyed it even though it had a few flaws. i hope you do end up rewriting it and i wish the best of luck don't give up |
willcraftNEX chapter 14 . 12/23/2017 MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! |
shadowshade13 chapter 14 . 10/14/2017 Why did u stop writing |
Jack chapter 14 . 8/22/2017 I swear if this story ends then my life ends that's how much I like this |
Death Fury chapter 11 . 8/22/2017 where is the water? |
Death Fury chapter 2 . 8/22/2017 not bad |
Izzybella12 chapter 14 . 8/22/2017 Another awesome chapter! Wow, you're on fire! lol I love Jeff's full name. It's hilarious! PM me when you decide to update again? Thanks! :) |
Meistar chapter 14 . 8/22/2017 KKKEEEEEEEEEP WWWWWRIITTTTIINNNNNGGGGGG! |
Izzybella12 chapter 13 . 8/19/2017 Awesome chapter! Glad I finally got to read it. So will you update more often now or...? Please don't let this be a one time thing! PM me (hopefully soon) when you post another chapter. |
Tyler chapter 4 . 8/16/2017 Do you happen to know the martial art, Aikido? This fighting has a lot of the principles in it from aikido. |
Thegaysnek chapter 13 . 8/18/2017 I dunno if its just me, but I ship Crescent and Eclipse... But anyways this story is good, only a few grammatical errors but I don't really care cause I make mistakes all the time, keep up the good work! |