Reviews for The One Card He Did Get |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please i want a second part love this one |
![]() ![]() It's probably too late to beg for a second part...but I'm going to anyways. PLEASE write more about how it goes with the rest of the team. I've read a number of great fics (including this one) that repair Danny's and Steve's relationship after that horrid, horrid ending to the season six finale but very few address the role the rest of the team, plus their friends, played in making Danny feel underappreciated. |
![]() ![]() Loved it! Second part please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story I read it loke 5 times because makes me happy and fill good inside. |
![]() ![]() So sweet! I would love to read more from you, your stories are really great! Thank you for writing :) |
![]() ![]() Where are you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... Oh, oh, oh... I do! I do! I do! I have been ruminating over it for a while, and I haven't even seen the full episode yet! Please, please do give us the 2nd part?! Also... I totally loved this. I liked that you had Danny blame the drugs for the half-baked gooey side of Steve showing... But I love his sincerity and Danny understanding and getting it. Great job... and the poem at the end. Absolute perfection! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is officially my favorite fix-it fic for this ep. You're awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great one-shot! I really really enjoyed seeing Danny get some credit for saving the day, and it made me happy that Steve stepped in and wrote that cute card for him! Again, this was great and it made me laugh and even cry a little. Thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll take more! I have a feeling that the five-0 writers will continue with their ideas of making a joke out of Danny and continue to have everyone ignore what he did for his supposed Ohana. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() really enjoyed this looking forward to youfinishing saving for sharing your talent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly would love a second part to go with this story because honestly I LOVED it! I love the interaction between Steve and Danny and how much they really do care for each other...love each other. Great writing and I hope you write more because I'll be reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More please!Puppy dog eye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done! I could absolutely see this happening on the show! Honestly, I was a little bit perturbed with Steve's behavior on the finale, but choose to believe he expressed his appreciation in private and TPTB elected not to show it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back you have been sorely missed! |