Did you intentionally leave out the defeat of Voldemort and his butt buddies? Because the whole battle and Horcrux hunt seem to be missing.

He would have been in fifth year actually, they came out at around 1995

Shouldn’t 5 Kilo calories 5000 calories, after all 1 kilo Means times 1000

Have the feeling of being rushed which makes. Sences with the amount that is not changed however you never mention h9w Voldemort is defted as there is enough diverges by then also the if gays are ok in your wizard univers then why did rose get asked to be a cover date?

love the story but you need to comb back through it because in a few spots you refer to rose as him or his.

...why the German?

there was nothing about Voldy's defeat

that was great, it was more of a summary than a story as I read it. but I find that perfectly fine (I'm tired of long winding HP fanfiction that never update anyways). good job :P

Yeah, I think you forgot to write the actual defeat of Voldemort.

Weird story. I was slightly curious so I skimmed it, but there doesn't seem to be any resolution in the end. They never defeated Voldemort, so he's just still out there somewhere, and has just stopped attacking people?

I thought that you said that this was going to start to stray from Cannon this year yet it really hasn't done that at all.

And what of the briefest mention of Harry getting his picture taken with Lockheart has he suddenly appeared and is Roses Brother even though Both Rose and Hermione didn't see him while there were standing there?

So extremely rushed in general but more so at the end with even less details too than was alright but you should not jump from one idea not explain it,then drop it and repeat the process

so you e clearly taken another story that was Harry/Hermione and tried to change every time it says Harry to Rose.