Awesome!

Ohh me likey hehe

good story, kept switch point of view though which was a little irritating. but well written otherwise.

I agree with a few other comments. The switching from point of view and 3rd to 1st person was a bit confusing to keep up with. Also, I felt like the end was rushed and a bit confusing. Did they get engaged or did he just ask her to move in with him? It just feels like there's something missing. I still think it was a nice story! I enjoyed reading it.

That was really good the time jumps where done nicely and the ending was suitably fluffy! Going to check out your other works now. Xoxo

Good story

I enjoyed your story! Well done! Fremione is one of my favourite parings!

I found your change in 3rd and 1st person distracting, it disrupted the flow of the reading. It can be from a characters point of view in 3rd person.

Also the nickname “Mia” is annoying, she has such a beautiful name.

Other than that I really liked it! :-)

Aw, this was good! Nice job!

I love it! :)

Interesting story, but I felt the ending scene could have been “more”.

I really want to read this story but it's all saved in code. Could you please change this?

I tryed to read sounds like it would be a good story if it was normal not with all the computer code or what it is if you fix it I will def read

Hi, it sounds like a great story. However it looks like the format you used got corrupted.

I wish I could read this story...

I’m enjoying reading this but I’m unsure what purpose italicizing conversation serves. Are they speaking in another language? Some sort of different dialect? It’s quite bothersome and detracts very heavily from the overall enjoyment of the fic