| Reviews for Silly Songbird |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 7/31 kinda unrealistic to expect that ophis couldnt just simply rip the knowledge from his mind but oh well |
 Coldvoid chapter 18 . 7/5 Just binged this in 3 days! There was a few spelling and grammatical errors but it's still beautiful! Going to wait for the next chapter ! |
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 11 . 7/4 "That bastard was giving me a slow clap. He was actually giving me a slow clap. Who the fuck does that anymore? Ok fine, I do, but fuck him! I'm just getting the quotes today! Enjoy readers looking at the replies, because I find the humor in a man...or woman |
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 11 . 7/4 "the plot that I threw out the window to get us to the "happy ending"...let me ephasize..."threw out the window" This readers is the whole plot |
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 10 . 7/4 "Azazel was either stupid or fucking devious;..." We both know which one the answer is |
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 8 . 7/3 The spat between the shadow and his brother i L |
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 8 . 7/3 He has the "that what she said" jokes and I'm cackling like a evil villain in my room |
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 4 . 7/2 You had no novel to fall back on?! That's just talent...pure talent... That is awesome Ok now the next chapter! |
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 4 . 7/2 "The system of this universe allows other systems to work within it as long as it was sensible. Sorry, I meant convenient." That...that is the definition of this book... |
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 3 . 7/2 "whoops there goes the cat twins again" Don't pull out great jokes randomly It makes m E |
| TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 2 . 7/2 Of course nobody calls his bullshit and just celebrates! It's Riser Phenix! |
| killerstreak chapter 6 . 7/2 For the love of God stop with the explanations and monologues ... You have like 4-5 lines spoken in each chapter and the rest is very boring. A basic rule of writing is that don't explain with words but by action of the character. |
| Angel Rios chapter 1 . 6/25 Having Rias fall for Riser would be better than having her forcibly with Issei, as he is still as pathetic as in the series. |
| Angel Rios chapter 18 . 6/25 Having Rias fall in love with Riser would be better than forcibly sticking her with Issei, as he is still as pathetic as he is in the series. |
| yuuji1 chapter 18 . 6/18 everything was great .. until the betrayal of Ophis: v |
