Yes, happy to see another chapter, and to find that Kotal's free again (one of my personal favorites)!

Sorry, but I really enjoyed Survival of the Fittest, and it's been like sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter of this story. Till next time!

Poor Charlie-boy...he has no idea what he's getting into! XD

Makes sense for the Lin Kuei to possibly adopt certain things for the Cyber-Intiative, (i.e. the faux-dreads, explosives et cetera, et cetera...)

Wonder how our bounty hunter from the cosmos will react to when he encounters a grown up Erron?

OMG! You acutally managed to smash two of my favorite things in the world together!
I am truly excited about this fic, I already like the way you write because of Desperado, but this? This is beyond EPIC!
Seriously, keep being awesome :3

Noooo Abe! D: (And now I have that same question as en-lumine has D:)

I love the set up and, well... pretty much everything about this chapter! And even though I figured Aaron/Erron was going to survive (because, well... duh), you sure as heck made us think that's not the case for a while there. And now I can't help but wonder what will happen years down the road when Erron and Yautja meet up again.

Awesome start to your new story! :)

Oooooohhh Helly! What an action-packed, double-whammy of a chapter! Normally I expected epilogues to be vague abstracts (or maybe I'm the idiot who writes like that X_X).. but here, you put us right in the thick of it and I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! :'D

And I do not use the term double-whammy lightly :P Here was Whammy 1 for me: YOU KILLED ABRAHAM! AAAAAHHH! Honestly, after Desperado, I had grown to really love him - his role, somewhat 'upbringing' of Aaron and silent protection - almost like Hanzo/Takeda, except the bond is more profound and complicated than that.. that death really got to me? :(

(Which leads me to a question - is this sort of a different fic entirely with the same OCs, or is this how Abraham really dies in Desperado too? O_O)

And the second whammy - a GOOD whammy: that Aaron was spared! Because from that set-up, it really did seem its gonna be the end of our fave kid gunslinger before he .. grew up to be a gunslinger, that is. I am not familiar at all with Alien/Predator (horror movies scare me yo!), but I'd like to see more of another OC too..! Update soon, buddy! :D

Excellent as all your tells are

Just to be clear Aaron is Erron Black right?

Ooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh S# -! IT'S PERSONAL FOLKS! Curious to see the showdown between Erron and this Predator.

D'iiiiiiiiiinteresting to see what Sonya's role will be on this fic.

Great job,
Doc