You currently have the story rated K meaning it is acceptable for kids to read. If I am not mistaken improperly rating your story could result in it getting removed. Just a heads up.

You need to change the actual rating on the story to M and not just write WARNING: M RATED. Or the sex scene out. You currently

Keep the baby... I mean make Rose keep the baby... Nice other than that

It's nice to read a 'Rose gets pregnant at 17' story where she isn't instantly over the moon excited. I mean - no offense to anyone who has been pregnant at that age but it's a HUGE thing to be pregnant and expecting a baby. Interested to see where you take this :)

I think its really good update soon

If you are going to have sex scenes you need to change the rating to M for mature! Also it's intimate not inter-mate.

Please continue writing! I loved it!

Not bad. Keep going

Nice...please do continue...all the best

Great story so far can't wait to read what happens next...post again soon please

Please continue...I like your writing style. It makes the characters very natural. And THANK YOU for no Tasha¡ I ve had enough of her! I read a lot of Romitri...you' ve got it. Keep it up!

Interesting but I'd like to see more