| Reviews for A Doctor, 2 TARDISes, and 2 Immortal Girls on Akhaten |
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   nomohakon chapter 21 . 8/5/2017 this chapter looks corrupted to me, with all the html code thrown in... also parts appear missing. |
| Miss Stella Black chapter 20 . 7/23/2017 OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter. Although this one was short, it definitely moved the plot along and excites me for the next! |
| Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 20 . 7/22/2017 More please:) |
| Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 19 . 6/25/2017 More please |
| Miss Stella Black chapter 18 . 6/13/2017 Oh my gosh! I wonder how Merry will survive being out in space. I liked Jack's flirting and Ashildr's snappiness. One question, why is Clara still being called Jenna when the Doctor isn't around? Would it be bad for Jack to know her real name? |
| Miss Stella Black chapter 17 . 6/13/2017 OMG! I finally all caught up! This story is really really good. I'm absolutely loving it. I loved the interactions between Jack and Ashildr, and I loved Ashildr and Clara's banter, and I love Merry, and I love everything! I can't wait for the next chapter. :D |
| Miss Stella Black chapter 11 . 6/10/2017 I'm reviewing on the mobile app, so if my comments don't seem to fit with the chapter they say they are under that's why. For some reason you have to manually choose the chapter you're reviewing for. But I am absolutely loving your story! |
| Miss Stella Black chapter 13 . 6/10/2017 Ooooo flirtations. I'm glad that Ashildr is safe! |
| Miss Stella Black chapter 9 . 6/10/2017 Omg Jack! |
| Miss Stella Black chapter 1 . 6/9/2017 Ahhhhh! Vashta Nerada! I wonder why Apollo gave them to Merry, if he's evil and planning something or if he was oblivious of the true nature of his gift! |
| Miss Stella Black chapter 1 . 6/9/2017 I liked seeing Merry's POV and I loved seeing the Doctor's! I like how he just assumes she's a future companion. |
| Miss Stella Black chapter 3 . 6/8/2017 Ahhhh this story is so good! I absolutely love that you brought in an older Merry, as well as 12! :D |
| EmAndFandems chapter 17 . 6/2/2017 can't wait for the rest of it! |
| EmAndFandems chapter 15 . 6/2/2017 why do you keep making me ship Me/Jack my heart cannot handle this |
| EmAndFandems chapter 14 . 6/2/2017 nooo listen to Clara she's being sensible :( you know it's a good story when you want to talk to the characters and tell them what you know ;) |
