Reviews for Forbidden |
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SeeMeLaugh chapter 13 . 7/24 This story is SO GOOD! |
Sophisticated Sage chapter 13 . 7/12 I love how nonchalant this chapter is, and the whole story for that matter :D |
beccasullivanwrites1 chapter 13 . 12/3/2019 Wonderful feel good Tomione! |
Ninamaria429 chapter 13 . 11/30/2019 This was sooo sooo satisfying! I like this Tom! |
Um chapter 5 . 11/18/2019 "You don't wish to see me anymore do you." "Of course not, Tom." NOT the response you meant, because she just confirmed to him that she doesn't want to see him. I would also point out that you've described his physical responses (e.g.: studying his shoes just before his not-a-question) but none on Hermione's here. I would expect she probably approached him, laid her hand on his shoulder, squatted down in front of him? Something to show a reaction. In your future stories, I hope you take the time to describe these scenes more fully because these are the things that draw readers fully into a story, and we can't see into your head. Not unless you let us through the only means available - your writing. So, if you don't write it down, we can't see it. |
PamExpelliarmus chapter 13 . 11/2/2019 That was a incredible story, I really loved it! You are an amazing writer. |
sakshi.chopra chapter 13 . 8/9/2019 I loved this story :) |
revinzy chapter 13 . 12/24/2018 Another "Tom turned good" that I like. Although a little bit too OOC for both of them, I still enjoyed reading this anyway. Thank you for sharing this with us |
Lanetk chapter 13 . 12/20/2018 I just found this story yesterday. It is so good! I couldn't put it down. Thanks so much for writing it. I am now going to go read your other stories. |
szabo.alexandra1991 chapter 13 . 12/18/2018 this was sweet Thank you just what i needed before bad |
sshanholtzer44 chapter 13 . 12/18/2018 very interesting read. i loved it. |
luisamalpica chapter 13 . 12/17/2018 One of my top favorite stories. Thank you. |
Guest chapter 13 . 10/21/2018 This is amazing. Next time I read it, I am going to review every chapter because it is much too good to only have 123 reviews. Bravo. Off to see if this writer has written anything else. |
jenkent chapter 13 . 7/26/2018 Excellent story! Loved all the dynamics! Beautiful job! |
lexia the beautiful wolf chapter 13 . 7/11/2018 can you do another fanfic like this except maybe it continues on as it would of originally as voldemort i think that would be quite interesting having him conflicted about memories of them together in the past yet having to still go after harry and the war. |