I know this story has been out and finished for a while but I want you to know that I love it. It's so damn cute and I'm only at chapter 4 so far lol. I was just going to read a bit tonight and the rest tomorrow but now I may have to binge it. So yea thanks to you I won't get any sleep. I hope ur happy with what you have done!

I like it

I am not a big fan of Yang x Blake (Bumblebee), and I never liked either of the characters independently either. In the first volumes or the later volumes.

So when they basically left children that have practically become dependent on them alone just for some sexy times it is honestly making me dislike them even more in this fanfiction. They even beat up Jaune in the previous chapter(s) despite the fact that he couldn't really do much. It's like they expect him to be a good parent/carer, yet send him to the infirmary as a bloody mess when he messes up, despite the fact that they are not being very good themselves, leaving them alone because of lust, there is a time and place for this stuff. So, so far, Bumblebee is making this really hard for me to carry on.

1. Well, I hope it will be a sequel or Bumblebee Chibi version, becuse this Fic was, by the Beard of God and Arse of the Devil, CUTE and GOOD!
2. And more Raven x Summer Fic/stories...
3. Keep Up the Good Work (Thumbs Up!).

I would love to read a bumblebee version. Does one exist or no?

I loved this so much! You're very talented and I just wanted to say congrats for not only fleshing out this wholesomely cute idea but also sticking it out until the end. It was a fun ride with joy and tears, and ultimately sits way at the top of my favorite fan-fics now. Thank you and have a nice day!

I have absolutely no clue how I skipped reading this months ago. This is flipping adorable.

I heavily enjoyed your fanfiction thank you for writing it. I just personally wished for a different ending but that's on me but thank you anyway for this brilliant read.

Wow, I've read your fan fiction and it was honestly one of the most exciting and entertaining story I've ever seen. I especially love the mother/daughter relationship that happened between Weiss and Blake and was really anticipating how the heiress would react to her caretaker once she was back to normal. Great job, I had lots of fun reading your story, and I can't wait to read more of it. 3

I read and reread this whole story, and it is INSANELY adorable! Can you please do a sequel to this story where something similar happens to Blake and Yang where Weiss and Ruby have to take care of them? Pretty please with mountains of cookies and Sorbet on top?

what if they had unlocked new powers because of the change?

it would have also been cool if they had been raised by the white fang for the rest of the story

you killed me with cuteness!

what if they had unlocked new powers because of the change?

you killed me with cuteness!