Prince Hans' disappointment ,after the thaw, thinking Elsa doens't want anything to do with him is so sad. I am glad she found their letter and her surprise visit to his ship is very sweet.
Your different Frozen story and its ending are awesome!

I like the little changes you did from the movie, especially Elsa asking Hans to kill her to save her sister and her people. Hans' explanation to Anna why he can't kiss her is a good change.
Update whenever you can. If you don't let months pass by between the updates, it'd be fine! :)

Hans kept writing letter to her and she to him but they never got them. Their parents kept the letters? But why?
I wanted to see how you were going to write the marriage proposal. Hans thinking it was a joke was a good explanation.

they are cuties!
fourteen brothers? just a mistake or you added another one?