Icb im actually rooting for Shiraishi - Syusuke here ;_; yukimura is too btch lmao

Why is everyone gathering at that one place? And tezuka you smooth mofo.. i nearly screamed. It's too funny that everyone kniws each other. Small world after all haha.

author YOu are the only one who made me read imperial pair without cringing and i find them hot too. Damn u and your awesome writing skills. Aaa this is good stuff man real good stuff. I wanna scream.

Duuuuude sht. I cant believe i bypassed this story for a long time. You,re keeling me on my toes mannn. Keep it up

Hahaha. U write intersting stuff man, i' m impressed. The convrrsation between niou and fuji is good too. I like that fuji is noss in what he does here. Awesome.

Oh boyyy,mthis is amusing XD i like that everybody knos fujis preferencea haha

Nice first chapter! This is interesting! And you write very well too. The flow is quite nice. I look forward to reading more!

Love it! I like you writing style..

that "she stole mitsu away from me!" is so darn cuuute! let me imagine a pouting, chibi syuu-chan hehe
and then that "if they were characters in a book, will the author give them a happy ending or-"
goddamnit! the author will be damned if she didn't! wahahahahah!

kyaaaaaaaaaaa! tezuka called fuji "syuusuke"! waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh! just waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh! i died screaming in kilig. (don't ask me what kilig is, there's no english translation of that and it's hard to describe)
oh yeah, i died another time when you said tefu got married. oh light! it's taking me...

i super agree with momo being a gel endorser... XD but wait, i need to go back to the upper part of the chapter... niou... yagyuu... oh geez. seriously? i know they were double partners in the series but i've never thought-oh gosh. just gosh.

and yeah, i really like how you wrote about atobe. until that 'hate-list'. he's not gonna do something to fuji, will he? i love atobe (sometimes) but i'm going to kill him if he did something bad.

ps. i thought of sengoku when it was mentioned that momo is a boxer. why didn't he become a basketball player instead? looool

oh yeah, i forgot to ask at the last chapter what happened twenty years ago. now i guess i have my answers. except with the questions, "can tezuka still remember fuji?" "was he stalking fuji all along?" "why on earth was he so desperately in love with fuji?" and "why did he have that tattoo on his nape?" i feel like it has got something to do with tefu's past. i mean... like putting that tattoo as a remembrance or something? oh, no one's looking for akaya, i swear. XD

that "four condoms later" and fuji's "you're not leaving until i'm satisfied." now i know why yukimura regretted sleeping with shiraishi. but... hey! who else stick to fanfiction guidelines aside from you? i did read it before starting my own story and thought i should follow it, but i changed my mind. and who the hell will flag you? tell me so i can slaughter them!

was fuji practically begging the author to have tezuka inside him? he did right? i love you author! so much! i can't wait for fuji's revenge. wahahahaha

so... why didn't i see a more detailed yagyuu prank, author?

and why didn't tezuka strip himself off his clothes? he should have! i mean, he'll get sick if he stayed on his wet clothes. darn it. i'm really hoping for some lemons on the next chapter. just give it to me please. my gut's been aching for all the teasing here haha

and, i do wonder if they talked about yukimura's hickey after that important discussion...

wait.. tezuka agreed to go in finland right. does that mean he's giving up on fuji? noooooooooooo!

shiraishi was a certified seme... so fuji here was a certified uke. omg, i can't help but smile. i think tezuka will really top fuji here. and i will sure enjoy it when the time comes. _

"even the weather's awed by my presence" what the fuck was that, atobe?

yay! finally, shiraishi and fuji's relationship will be over! i hope tezuka takes this opportunity to-wait, did sanada called tezuka? so he's on his way back to tokyo now? no! he should be staying with his beloved senpai! uwaaaahhhh! i won't forgive tezuka if he leaves fuji now!
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yukimura: aren't you forgetting something?
you: *shakes head*
me: what? what is it?
yukimura: really?
you: *nods vigorously*
me: what the heck was it? will yukimura kill you because you let shiraishi make his bottom so sore? what?
yukimura: *smirks* good. now go. dinner's waiting.
me: what the eff? what is it really? hey tell me!
you: *dashes out looking for niou.*

wait... i don't quite get it. oh yeah, it was niou who was supposed to get laid with yagyuu, isn't it? lol or am i just a pervert?