Reviews for Holy Slagballs They're Alive!
Tasuke Date chapter 14 . 10/24/2016
. I re-read your story again! I love it! PLEASE update soon if you can! I know it gets annoying to be constantly asked to update...but please try! I also have another song if you like to put songs int your stories. It would fit Katlyn! Skillet ~ Undefeated & Skillet ~ Feel Invincible Just a suggestion! The second song could be played when Kat trains or something if you want.
Iron-ninja chapter 14 . 9/18/2016
I like it keep going with the story
Jazzilynn Hall chapter 10 . 8/21/2016
This is based on the G1 bots, right? If so, Starscream is a scientist too. Not that it's something commonly portrayed with how often he's trying to take out Megatron... but I still think he'd like a lab of his own. I think in every series but Bayverse, Starscream was a scientist. In Bayverse it was Skywarp, which I totally don't understand since he's such a scatter brain... by he's my scatter brain. My favorite Seeker._
Tasuke Date chapter 13 . 8/21/2016
YASSSS! Thank you! I seriously love you right now. After an eternity you finally updated! I love the new chapters! I know now that school has started you may be busy...but please update soon!
A Tfp fangirl chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
Ratchet's log:
Very nice. The details very well match real cybertroneans. Hopefully you will update you soon. The reason that I am doing this update instead of starlight prime, is that she is missing in action. As you last heard from her, the alarm sounded at our base. It was renegades left over from the fall of the decepticons. She was fighting the decepticon jet flame and she ran off in the woods after her. They were intensely battling and then she disappeared. She hasn't been seen since. Her parents are worried sick! What do you think happened? I will update on her whereabouts with the next update.
-ratchet
A Tfp fangirl chapter 8 . 8/4/2016
Hey! A Tfp fangirl here! Great job on this chapter! Another great one! That old rust bucket! *alarm sounds* "oh scrap! That's the decepticon alert! Well I'll give you the low down on it next time! Sorry for the short review! Until next update!
-a Tfp fangirl
Tasuke Date chapter 8 . 8/4/2016
Yay! You updated! I loved it! It was long too. One of my chapters on my story was 10 pages in Microsoft! xD How many did this take? I love it, please update soon! Also, if you're taking requests you should have her bring the bots to one of her fights. It'd be interesting.
Nerd.queen03 chapter 8 . 8/4/2016
No it's fine and I am new to writing stories can you please give me advice to improve my story writing? I love this chapter and you're an amazing author
Guest chapter 7 . 7/31/2016
Hi! A Tfp fangirl here! That's what I am! A Tfp fangirl! Great chapter by the way I loved the surprise of her being a street fighter! And ratchet lecturing her? Just like the real rust bucket! *starlight prime walks in* "Uh smokescreen?" "Yeah?" What are you doing on my computer?" "Uhhhhh... Nothing." "Wait! Are you reading fanfiction? The one thing you make fun of me for?" "Ok fine. I just wanted to see why you like it so much!?" "Well you scrap heap, you have five seconds to get out of my room and off my computer before I tell sire that you were on my computer." Uh oh. "Five, four, three,..." "Ok I'm out!" Hahaha! Well that's smokey for ya! Thanks for the great chapter! Please update soon!
-a Tfp fangirl
Tasuke Date chapter 7 . 8/2/2016
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I know I can't really talk since I haven't updated in a while, But this story is so good! You left us on a cliff hanger! I love this story!
Nerd.queen03 chapter 6 . 8/1/2016
I love this story:-P Please update !
Sirenix Prime chapter 7 . 7/29/2016
YESSS! LOVE IT! I was too lazy toog intoy account, but it is me! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I GOTTA SEE THE BOTS' REACTIONS!
CarsCars2Fanatic chapter 7 . 7/29/2016
Ahhhh! I loved it! :D Absolutely amazing! I'd never in a million years wanna get stared down by 'The Hatchet', would you?
A Tfp fangirl chapter 6 . 7/23/2016
No! No! No! NO! It did not suck! It was great! I love the update! I'm wondering what that green stuff was in the secret compartment and why it was no big deal that she broke some ribs! "Starlight? Are ya in here?" Scrap its Smokscreen! "Uh yeah I'm in here." "What are you doing?" "Guess." "Fanfic AGAIN!?" "Yep! Hey aren't you grounded because you set off the smoke alarm at your failed attempt at making energon candy?" "Uhhhhhhh..." "That's what I thought!" "Fine I'll go back to my room, but mark my words this is not over!" "Yeah whatever."
-a Tfp fangirl
Tasuke Date chapter 6 . 7/17/2016
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This story is amazing amdvery original! I love it!
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