Oh no that can't be good.

Boy that was close!

Very cryptic!

Goodness! This holds some answers! But really, Jack, did he have to go and just shoot the guy? Otherwise... wow. Ianto. That was unexpected. Not his anger but his not caring about anyone else's pain.
I kinda hope the team will give Owen another chance. Don't want him to lose everything. But then, who'd want to work with a serial killer assassin? Are we that forgiving?

Yup. Better find Owen. Goodness! What a scene. So yeah, now this is the chapter I was waiting for where the pieces of the puzzle start to fall into place. Slowly. One by one... ;)

Right. What? I'm not sure what's going on here. Again. ;)
How many more chapters are there? I don't really want this story to be over... O:)

Heehee. Bastard!
Okay, they've pretty much said what I thought about the chapter. ;) We all agree that Tosh is the sweetest and they had quite the conversation. I'm glad that Jack realised talking is good though. :) And that Ianto admitted he needs help. Sounds like a good start for recovery. If it wasn't for that crazy guy trying to kill Rhi and Ianto... How come soneone else hasn't taken out Rhi yet? Did soneone even think to protect her?

My sentiment exactly. Is Owen practicing honesty on top of complimenting? He's really lost it, hasn't he? Or maybe he found something he had lost.
Also, you posted this like 20 min before I got up!? LOL!

Oh! Goodness! Poor Jack! And poor Ianto.
But hey! Tosh wouldn't set him up like that! She's 100% cute! ;D
And yay, good angsty chapter!

Yeah, so the Gray part was unexpected for all of us! What's that supposed to mean now?
Tosh is seriously cute but Ianto will always be the cutest! O:)
New chapters are very much appreciated! As are newly posted or freshly translated pieces! You are brilliant! :D

Ooooh! The angst! The fluff! The wickedness of Ianto... :D

Because they're idiots? No, sorry. They are complicated people in a complicated situation?
Anyway, nice one. Thank you! :D
What do you mean, Owen dropped his gun? Huh?
And I'm now picturing Rhi and Jack's chat. Must have been slightly awkward. "Your brother nearly died." "I know you're sleeping with him." Uh... what? LOL!
More soon? O:)

Uhm... what?

Oi! What's this cliffhanger thingy? Are you crazy to leave us hanging in here like that!? :D
I love Jack's contemplation on love. And the "kind of love" descriptions. I very much hope he's going to tell Ianto!
So, even if Owen shot the intruder first - which I simply hope happened for Ianto's sake - there must be more of his sort to come. Owen can't just keep killing them until they are all down. Someone will get hurt. I'm a little afraid he did hit Ianto after all. And why do they want him and Rhi dead anyway?

Okay, here comes the heavy stuff. Poor Ianto. So he's been with Jack for two years anf hid that pain in his back all of that time? That's tough.