There a few minor spelling mistakes and some off putting plot rushing, but overall an interesting and original concept that has potential.

Not the direction I thought this was going to take, but I'm not disappointed. Good on Hermione for confronting them. Good on the boys for trying with her. This was a fun read )

~Tori

I swear you are just asking for advise on how to wright seductions because there is someone in real life you want to seduce, lol

Great story, thank you!

Yes, it does sound pretty darn good. Too bad it wasn't in the movies, because it is definitely something I would like to see!

I am enjoying this so much that I can't stop reading even though I have been up all night. I love your imagination!

Severus being sweet and gentle? Maybe he finds Hermione crying because Ron insulted her again, and tells her she deserves much better. He tells her she could have any man since she is so beautiful, intelligent and kind. Hermione doesn't believe him of course, until he looks directly into her eyes and tells her she is the most beautiful woman he has ever seen. He strikes his fingers down her cheek and tells her any man would be lucky to have even a moment of her attention...
I hope you are still planning to finish the rest of the fantasies!

Now I want to read all the rest of them, but especially Snape! This is so much fun! Thanks for writing!

How on earth is she going to choose?

I imagine that is exactly how Draco would fantasize about the Gryffindor Princess. Well done!

I just realized you labeled the chapters by the person fantasizing about her, and I can't wait to read more. Thank you!

Love it! The perfect ending :) you could've dragged it out but I'm glad you didnt

Vial. Not Vail.

well it started off very smexy but after hermoine woking it was really very tame. an ok fic but i doubt it's somethingbill read more than once

nice ending..