Reviews for Family First |
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Guest chapter 13 . 5/26 Im so sorry, i dont know what i would do if my uncle died |
Wildcatatheart chapter 5 . 4/12 so confused...harry put Luna in the house...she came back out then the put up a tent...why? |
Francisco Javier chapter 1 . 3/23 One chapter only to explain something that every one that is looking at your fic most know. You have to do better |
Rojas Avila Adriana Liseth chapter 12 . 1/28 Más capitulo por favor que me encanta mucho tu historia. |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/1/2019 James Sirius Potte/Evelyn Call |
DonPJuan chapter 1 . 8/20/2019 family first always |
Love Faith Embers chapter 14 . 6/22/2019 Good story so far! And, congrats on the baby girl! |
dutchgirl chapter 14 . 4/30/2019 Hello, I want to wish you all the best with you're little girl. And to wish you a lot of love, luck, happines and a good health. I just read this story and I loved it. Lot's of love from the Netherlands Dutchgirl Esther |
ej-83 chapter 14 . 3/24/2019 take your time..your baby needs more priority then updating a story..all the best |
DarkRavie chapter 14 . 3/24/2019 Take however long you need to get your life settled then come back with full force. I look forward to your next posts whenever you return. |
kalikk chapter 14 . 3/24/2019 Parabéns pelo bebê, desejo muitas felicidades a vocês e tomara que tudo dê certo :) |
forestreject chapter 14 . 3/24/2019 Thank you for the update! Good to hear from you. Was worried. Gtg. work |
skyefire chapter 14 . 3/24/2019 Congratulations on your baby. |
LadyQuinzel chapter 6 . 8/23/2018 I'm not flaming and I'm not hating. I just think that you're trying to turn the war into something much more gruesome and I think you're exaggerating a bit too much. They were damaged enough as it was in the movies and books. Do you honestly think they would have children with a war still waging? Are you insane? The reason why the youngsters fought was to make the world a better place for the future generation. Lily being raped by a vampire? That vampire would've killed her with one squeeze, especially since she's barely a teenager. And how can she still act like a child after an experience such as that? Your characters are too broken. I'm sorry, but I don't see them ever being anything but broken people. Good Luck healing them without it seeming unbelievable. |
desireecarbenell chapter 2 . 6/29/2018 Really good chapter. |