Reviews for Family First
Guest chapter 13 . 5/26
Im so sorry, i dont know what i would do if my uncle died
Wildcatatheart chapter 5 . 4/12
so confused...harry put Luna in the house...she came back out then the put up a tent...why?
Francisco Javier chapter 1 . 3/23
One chapter only to explain something that every one that is looking at your fic most know. You have to do better
Rojas Avila Adriana Liseth chapter 12 . 1/28
Más capitulo por favor que me encanta mucho tu historia.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/1/2019
James Sirius Potte/Evelyn Call
DonPJuan chapter 1 . 8/20/2019
family first always
Love Faith Embers chapter 14 . 6/22/2019
Good story so far! And, congrats on the baby girl!
dutchgirl chapter 14 . 4/30/2019
Hello,
I want to wish you all the best with you're little girl. And to wish you a lot of love, luck, happines and a good health.
I just read this story and I loved it.
Lot's of love from the Netherlands
Dutchgirl Esther
ej-83 chapter 14 . 3/24/2019
take your time..your baby needs more priority then updating a story..all the best
DarkRavie chapter 14 . 3/24/2019
Take however long you need to get your life settled then come back with full force. I look forward to your next posts whenever you return.
kalikk chapter 14 . 3/24/2019
Parabéns pelo bebê, desejo muitas felicidades a vocês e tomara que tudo dê certo :)
forestreject chapter 14 . 3/24/2019
Thank you for the update! Good to hear from you. Was worried. Gtg. work
skyefire chapter 14 . 3/24/2019
Congratulations on your baby.
LadyQuinzel chapter 6 . 8/23/2018
I'm not flaming and I'm not hating. I just think that you're trying to turn the war into something much more gruesome and I think you're exaggerating a bit too much.

They were damaged enough as it was in the movies and books.

Do you honestly think they would have children with a war still waging? Are you insane? The reason why the youngsters fought was to make the world a better place for the future generation. Lily being raped by a vampire? That vampire would've killed her with one squeeze, especially since she's barely a teenager. And how can she still act like a child after an experience such as that?

Your characters are too broken. I'm sorry, but I don't see them ever being anything but broken people. Good Luck healing them without it seeming unbelievable.
desireecarbenell chapter 2 . 6/29/2018
Really good chapter.
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