| Reviews for Pokemon Kanto Arc: A Dragon's Beginning |
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  Vincent balmes chapter 9 . 3/21 Good story but next time make it a little longer plus I hope you got my reviews of my ghost dragon slayer spells and some secret arts and let ash have ghost dragon king mode since yakuri could be a ghost dragon king and red's magic is fire dragon slayer magic and fire dragon king mode since he was raised by igneel and let ash have some harem |
 Ashpoke55 chapter 9 . 3/19 Really glad for the new chapter can’t wait for the next one |
| Nafsika chapter 8 . 2/13 Hi! Nice story! I can't wait to learn more about Ashs magic and the voice in his head! Loki is so cute and funny! Will we see him use his magic in other ways other than flying? As for the rest! I hope Ash to find a chance to reveal to his mother his magic and learn more about his father and the Oak family and Leaf! Thanks and keep up the good job! |
| Roni chapter 8 . 10/25/2019 I love this story. Can't wait for next chapter. Please update. |
| vincent balmes chapter 8 . 10/22/2019 So you took my powerful spells for your fanfiction huh and did you read fairy tail 100 year quest chapter 36 bro there's a ghost dragon slayer named wraith man maybe has some spell called dragon spirit bro also i can't for the next chapter on november or december man i'll think of some new spells i promise you that man happy halloween dude |
| rufus264 chapter 8 . 10/18/2019 Great chapter |
| Emoni chapter 7 . 9/15/2019 Can you update this story I really like it it needs more to it. PLEASE UPDATE IT! |
| Tinkerbell chapter 7 . 9/14/2019 Whut will happin next in chapter 7? I really whunt to now |
| Tinkerbell chapter 3 . 9/14/2019 Hi can you write more I really like the story and when you get to the gym battles can you make it adsacky like the anima fairytail please. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/3/2019 This is stupid |
| Vincent balmes chapter 7 . 7/27/2019 Thank you my star bro also I ship ash x leaf man because I ship Gary x Misty bro also I want red's magic to be the first generation fire dragon slayer not to mention he has fire god slayer magic and fire devil slayer magic too and I want ash to have shadow god slayer magic and shadow devil slayer magic too bro |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/20/2019 Uh, do you mind telling me what happened to your Ladybug Story titled, Narcisse |
| rufus264 chapter 7 . 7/18/2019 Great chapter q |
| Vincent balmes chapter 6 . 6/18/2019 Dude it's already been 7 months since you made this when are you going to make the next one I'm serious here I wanna know what |
| JuptileNamudori253 chapter 1 . 3/26/2019 *clicks follow story* Please continue~ PS: Can't wait for Tower of Terror~ |
