I love this fic. I know you were going through some serious struggles during the last update. I hope you are doing better now, and I'd love to see a new chapter.

Wow, this was absolutely incredible! I like Jon and Sansa but I was surprised to find that I really liked her and Willas too.

First of all, I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you are doing better now. I also want to compliment you on a such a great story! It's been a delight to read and I really enjoy seeing POVs from all the Stark children. The schemes and the ploys! Ah, so good. Thank you so much for writing this story and I would love an update. Have a great day!

I just found this story and so far, I love it. The premise is good and the way you utilize the characters is really interesting. I just have one complaint. You consistently use the wrong homophone of bare/bear.

As a verb, bare means to uncover or expose.
Bear means to carry or uphold. Thus every time you've used bare in the story so far, you really meant bear.

You started off well but you went off the rails. They know whats going to happen it would make sense that they would do something to change the future. This was a good story but it went to shit

"im not crying, you're crying" nah im definitely crying though kcxkdjcjxhhxjv

love this so freaking much omg y'all don't even knowww. im out here rereading lines four times to give them the freak out they deserve

I just found this story, thanks for writing! I hope you’re able to come back to it one day

The story is great not gonna lie but in chapter 19 the using tête à tête is a mistake because french isn't part of the game of thrones world

Hope you continue the story

Hey don't take my review to heart...You are a talented writer, it's just disappointing to see that you weren't using your talent to your full potential. So it's a compliment as well.

Well I don't think I've seen characters acting in such a stupid manner like ever. They had so many opportunities to play the game of thrones, to win in a decisive manner, and they didn't... just because the author wanted to stick to the old and done plot, with a few characters moved here and there. Let me elaborate: right from when Jon said to Catelyn that Jaime and Cersei were the ones who pushed Bran, if they had any sense or were true to character, they would have gone to Robert with this and arrested the Lannisters there itself. Robert has more than enough influence to curb Cersei at this point. Even if this did not happen, and they stupidly carried on as they did, then Bran would never sacrifice his father and Rob would never agree to it. Also, there would be no need to sacrifice his father, as the only reason the Lannisters were warned about Eddard acting against them is because Sansa went and betrayed her father in the old timeline. As this didn't happen here, right now the Lannisters would be the ones imprisoned. Even should they not do this, Sansa had a million opportunities to act through her father and warn Robert about his plotting wife. But they did nothing, because the author lacks imagination. I guess the only thing in favor of this story is that it's well written and grammer perfect. What a pity...it had so much potential.

Please update milord we await the next chapter.

I hope you continue and finish the story it’s really good

Muy buena historia espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo.
Solo espero que esta vez los Stark restantes puedan vivir una mejor vida.
Espero que Jon y Robb tengan alguno bastardos en todo su viaje, no te olvides del Muro.