Reviews for XCOM: The Soldier and the Ethereal |
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The Book of Eli chapter 4 . 7/19 Short fic but a quick nice read. |
The Book of Eli chapter 1 . 7/19 Interesting very interesting... |
OfficialWeedTesterGuy chapter 4 . 4/4/2018 The writing is cringey, but everything else is pretty good. Always wondered about Ethereas turning sides in the war. The romance arc, though fast, it pretty good too. Keep writing. |
A honest critic chapter 4 . 1/24/2018 It’s decent but not very good. I give it a 6/10. Keep working on your writing skills. |
Darth Revan chapter 4 . 11/9/2017 good story |
Elder chapter 3 . 2/9/2017 Somebody didn't take Ethereal Biology class. I don't recall Ethereals having breasts or much of anything, in the way of sexualness. Meh never mind. |
Elder chapter 1 . 2/8/2017 Interesting... yes, very interesting, I shall be having a few words with General, oh what's that Human expression... Douchebag, I believe |
pt1oef chapter 4 . 12/19/2016 What did you do? Such controversial topics should have far more content? You should read other FanFiction about family. |
pt1oef chapter 2 . 8/17/2016 This isn't bad, just too fast. |
slayer911 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016 This is actually not a bad start, not bad grammar too, can't wait for the next update. |
pt1oef chapter 1 . 7/6/2016 Strange but I like your start. |