Sequel damnit the world demands it!
I loved this story and hate to see it end bloody hell good job!

Damn this is a really good ending

I was very curious as to how this was gonna end, and I gotta say I liked it! It sets up the potential sequel (Please do it, I'm loving your writing) overall the story was great, everything fit together, plus you kept Kenny alive so for me that's always a plus. I would rate the overall story a 10/10. Thank you for the great read and if possible do a sequel.

I wish I could see the look on Clem's face when she sees her friend get tackled by a giant lizard. She's pretty perturb.

Ahh is that it.

What the fuck pregnancy

Okay you have seriously got to start putting the dialogue in seperate lines and not put it together as paragraphs, its just not working well for the eyes.

yes have her knock up with wrex kid XD

So a couple things eith this chapter, firstly it makes abolutely no sense having sovereign survive somehow to be used to get through the rift. Im willing to put accept the whole rift thing but hoe garrus is going threw, thats a bit stupid. Also since when is the eezo core a warp core? Unless somehow we have a different ftl in this story. I think you should take another look at this chapter. Also somethjng i will mention too with the first chapter, it makes no sense for shepard to believe that synthetics would rise again as a reason for not wanting to destroy the reapers, especially considering the geth in mass effect are proof thats not true. I could understand if it was that she didnt want to kill edi and the geth but the reason you provided is sounding like the reapers reasons and that makes it sound like shepard is indoctrinated. I like this story so please dont take my comments the wrong way but it might be worth going over some points in the story so that it makes a little more sense.

Oh no... Not Lilly. Figures she'd hold up with someone like Carver.

I like this chapter, really well done, only thing is as a suggestion, i'd have the Group call Shepard by her last name to avoid any confusion later on with the other Jane, other than that I applaud you on this

Awe I love that reunion between Clem and Kenny. Great chapter please keep going!

Gah! Omg I need to see/read what happens next! I love this crazy idea of Shepard being zapped to another plane of existence via synthesis and the fact that she is ALIVE! Love it! Not to mention she's with Garrus (favourite romance option). Dude please keep writing this!

I liked that you included the Aftermath of Shepard's "death" but at the same time i'm conflicted on how i want them finding her to end. Overall so far i am enjoying this story though and Love it as it has my Shepard's pairing, so I'd give this so far a 9/10

Well, I don't think you should put a pregnant Sheppard in this story, because... well Garrus isn't human.

But I have a question: Sheppard was "synthesied" before she hit WD world? Because it would be very interesting.