Please continue

I could not be more sad about this being over. I see it was published over two years ago, but I really hope you will come back and give us an ending! 3

Fun, but too much about the clothes in one indigestible infodump. And it's madeleines, and you needn't say French every time. "Of the trees" in Irish is "na gCrainne". Just FYI.

Oh, thank heavens, she got to live AND stay human. Well done. As much as I ship Jareth and Sarah, if I were her, and he did this to me, I'd end it with him permanently. You don't claim to love someone, only to go behind their back to get what you want, especially if it can harm that person.
I am very interested to see where this is going to go, still. So glad you updated. Well done.

Thank you for the update! This chapter had me crying but it was great. I can’t wait for the next update!

This is just what I needed after a long day at school! Thank you for the update, hope to see more. ️

Uh-oh. Sarah's not going to like this. At all.
I'd be angry if someone did something like that to me without asking, especially if it could kill me.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
I see what you did there, by the way. Nice Loki reference.

I am at school rn and I am freaking out internally. Why must you toy with my feelings?

I sincerely hope that you will update this sometime soon. It's really good.
Jareth's switch from nearly drowning Sarah in a pool of blood to helping her with her exams practically gave me whiplash.

I read this in one sitting and it is so good! XD

Wow, it has almost been a month since I have read any fanfiction at all. You are doing a great job.

Omg, I've binged through your story and LLOOOVVVEEEE it. I can't wait to see what comes next. Keep up the good work darling.~

This is great! I love how you made Jareth's personality so intense (possessive/stalkerish). However I'm not 100% familiar with the rating system so maybe I'm wrong, but I feel like the rating should be changed because of the dream in ch 7 and the ballet dream where he groped her.. I will say I was greatly surprised to read ch. 7 since the story is rated "k" and there wasn't a warning of torture before the chapter began. I don't mind it, but as a suggestion, maybe you should put a warning on those chapters and future chapters so other readers don't freak out. I really really hope you continue and finish the story. I want to find out what happens next!

"A short but long box"? Kind of contradictory?

*cries internally* I’m really enjoying this, I need more!