this is just amazing

OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM- this is the best miraculous fanfic I’ve read so far like written so perfect. Maybe just the lengthened apologising and Plagg but I guess it was necessary. Really good!

I loved this so much. You are a very talented writer. It took me on an exciting roller coaster of emotions and it was amazing. Great job!

Thank you for an endearing story that gives a hard look at the emotional consequences of assumptions and self defensive actions. It has been refreshing and tons of fun! Many thanks for sharing your talents with this fandom, I can't wait to go track down the sequel.

AMAZING! You had so much commitment to this story and it was awesome! Marinette’s misunderstanding about how long Adrien knew her identity was a great twist! It brought in a lot of good angst without actually hurting anyone’s integrity! Loved it- very intelligent writing!

Ugh sorry but I hate the guilttripping on Marinette. Especially Plaggs rant. It was really unnecessary.

She is being portrayed as a very selfish and unlikeable Person for having anxiety and self-doubts. For having doubts that people would like her only for her larger-than-life hero persona.

Yes she hurt Adrien but this is blowing it out of proportions in a spectacular way..

But up until this moment I absolutely adore the story, you write beautifully and you have a very nice style of worldbuilding and I hope this Mari-Guilttrip will be over soon so I’ll be able to enjoy this fic to the fullest again.

Okay, I really like this story but there's just one thing that's really been bugging me. It's "I", not "i". I know it's probably "i" when you're texting, but "I" should be capitalized in a story whether or not it's beginning a sentence, just like a proper name.

*breathes* Whew. Felt good to get that out. If you're choosing to write "i" that's your choice, but it is generally accepted as proper for a character to refer to themselves as "I" (uppercase). Thank you.

Really liked this one, especially plagg. Angry plagg. Very interesting

Ugh, I can see the parallels between Marinette and Adrian's fight to Tikki and Plaggs. Tikki, damn, give him a chance to speak! Marinette is not the only one suffering.

That was a lot of, lot of, lot of, introspection. I hope the story moves along in the next few chapters.

Oh my gosh, best reveal ever!

Aaaand there goes the happiness

I want to hug this chapter so bad holy sweetness it's so beautiful

This review will about the part where plagg is arguing with tikki.
It was said by plagg that adrien was also insecure, i dont think this was really a problem for him. For example in the "origins" episode when adrien found out about plagg and the duties he would have if he accepted the miraculous, he embraced his role wholeheartedly without question.
In the reverser episode when chat was hit the akuma his most defining trait that reversed was his courage, the ability to accept fear and rise above it.
So no, his greatest problem isnt insecurity, its isolation, like in the episode where people's nightmare were coming to reality. Adrien's nightmare was being caged in walls, isolated from everybody, alone.
I believe plagg's arguement should have been like this:
"He's an orphaned child with a still living parent, left alone by his mother, shunned by his father, forced do something his doesn't want to do everyday day(modelling), surrounded by people who only see him for looks and name(photographers and fans), isolated from people his age unable to make friends(home-schooled). The kid has issues. So now he found out that the two people he loved the most are one in the same and a week later he gets ignored, rejected, and thrown away like a stray cat."
Okay just to clarify im not saying mari was totally at fault, they're both idiots, he should have told her and she should have given him a benefit of a doubt. But i just think plagg's arguement was misplaced.

I really really hate how the blame was entirely forced onto Marinette. She has the right to be insecure and untrusting and for Adrien to not have told her he knew just furthered those thoughts. It was never really addressed that he should have told her what he knew. Sure, there was like one line where he apologized for keeping it from her, but immediately after Marinette refuses to hear it and says it wasn't his fault, it was hers and that she's the one to blame. But if he had told her from the beginning there wouldn't have been any problems. This was really good, but I just can't get behind the fact that Adrien did nothing wrong and that Marinette is the only one at fault. The whole thing was that she should have trusted him more, but he's the one who was hiding something from her. You're really good at writing but I hope that in the future you think more about where you place blame.