17/20 - EE (Exceeds Expectations)
Notes from Wolf:

"Characters were wonderfully written. Draco was great, as was Astoria (not that we know much of her, as she is such a minor character). I've never read about a story of goodbye like this. I really liked the idea and the was it was written. There were a few formatting issues with the story that disrupted the flow (but I didn't take points because I wasn't sure if that was the website's doing). I also felt like the ending was a little abrupt. I feel like there needed to be another scene between Draco's sixth year and the marriage. I noticed a few mistakes, but nothing major (mainly with punctuation). The additional prompt was used well, and it stood out, but the base prompt seemed a little lost. I know that the scenes were showing the prompt, but the story didn't really have anything to do with a family/friend being insulted. This was really creative, and the emotions you showed in the story were strong. I particularly liked the first memory. It was enjoyable to read."

The ending. So sad. Why did you have to do this to me?
However, I read a really nice story, so I think I'm going to forgive you. ;)

that is both sweet and sad at the same time. thank you for this story.