Reviews for You Telling Me I'm A Gamer Now?
The reaper of death445 chapter 9 . 7/26
Everyone stop reading this because he will never use his stat points and make him weak just so the mc can keep on almost dying.
KingOfEternity chapter 13 . 7/15
interesting, i wonder what sacred gear he received
Dragon0905 chapter 13 . 7/5
Your early chapters were more of an outline with some added basic information. While the last few have been better, they are still lacking in a number of ways.
Your plot is seemingly spun on a whim.
Your grammar is decent sometimes. Others, it becomes quite atrocious.
You leave so critical peices of information out while inserting things that seemingly have no reason to be in the story.
You give the MC an abundance of gear that is either god level or should be only rare and that stuff typically acts drastically of a higher function than it should.
I'm willing to give it some time. However, please try to stay on track. Not everyone has watched or read where you got some of the things you are introducing. Even if it's just a random thought from the character of where the item originated. Quite a few things from the earlier chapters, I've never heard of. And trying to find them is honestly a pain.
Another thing is, instead of doing a ridiculous amount of flashbacks or just saying it was from a quest he did SOMETIME in the past, try to find a reason preferably within the current chapter for why he has said random completely overpowered and weird item. The chapter involving the poison pearl was really well done for this type of story.
However if you said he happened to have something basic in his inventory that anyone would want to keep on have like food, then no one would question it.
GXVIII chapter 2 . 4/13
What a fuucking mess of a story
KneegearFakeget chapter 13 . 1/7
There's too many flashbacks in recent chapter, kinda confusing though
0vrLrd71 chapter 2 . 1/5
so the hand seals are unnecessary for using elements he could do the jutsu s without them and how can adam even react to him with clock up? you're giving him too much credit especially right now that he hasn't met cinder or whatever, he isn't that strong rn... sooo I just wanted to mention this too...
0vrLrd71 chapter 1 . 1/5
from what I can see you need a beta, proven by how you write had insted of has or something similar, also you add unnecessary info in the descriptions, in the [deck] where it says active or some half of it doesn't even need to be written, another thing is that you need to work on your transitions, the chapter just doesn't flow right, well I hope you got better and don't think I'm just trying to flame you or something like that, I'm just being honest with what I thought but i'm still looking forward to reading your story...
shugokage chapter 13 . 12/31/2019
Great job on this interesting chapter!
DG2 chapter 2 . 12/31/2019
Not liking this story so far. He is all chill about killing zombies, but freaks out from being teleported to another world. Thought his gamers mind would kick in. Also the pacing is way too quick and he is getting too many abilities already. I can't see RWBY being an ideal universe to start with considering his quests are being forced onto him.
Rc Jackson chapter 1 . 12/14/2019
goes from level 1 to level 3 and goes from 100 hp and 1000 mp to 19k hp and 25k mp at LEVEL 3! and his stats that would presumably affect and therefore alter health points typically like either vitality or endurence or a combination of those 2 and/or strength and so on... havent changed much... what fking buff did he receive inbetween level ONE AND LEVEL THREE to get damn near 20,000 health points and almost 30,000 magic points to both his pools?! NANI?!
Green chapter 9 . 10/4/2019
Please, for the sake of my sanity, hire a proof reader
Green chapter 8 . 10/4/2019
Poor writing, worse than how it started, and the plots deteriorated to the same degree
Green chapter 2 . 10/4/2019
Good premise, poor grammar; consider proofreading
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2019
Highly retarded oc
Ahmed Maged chapter 7 . 7/7/2019
Wtf he could have end it from the start
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