I dont know how to feel. I want the next chapter so badly to see how meeting Molly goes but I also don't want it because I love Cedric and don't want him to go.

I loved this chapter

Taylor

Thanks for the update!

Great chapter!

I had a awful feeling pit in my stomach at the swapping of lists. I just have visions of Vikki looking at the list during her summer of grief and being brokenhearted

Loved this chapter.

I really love it so far! I’m excited for an update!

I love this one! And after reading the author’s note, why would we hate you? this is probably one of the best oc fanfics I’ve read! *hearts*

Ahhh! I love Fred and George’s secret, and I absolutely love their kiss! Thanks!

well, I thought Fred could have been smarter than that. glad that vicki is ok

Loved It! I really enjoyed reading the background bits of Fred and Vicki's prior interactions 3

Great chapter!

Hello! So just found your story today, and I wanted to let you know that I spent all day reading it. You've done such a great job in incorporating Vicki into the HP storyline. Usually, when I read Harry Potter fanfics with a Fred/OC pairing, the author often creates a storyline that forcibly inserts the OC into the HP world, disrupting the overall canon of the timeline. In your case, I really love how you've created Vicki and her familial background. Her identity isn't tied to Fred, and she has background experiences & friends outside of her relationship. What I'm essentially saying, is that I love that Vicki was a fully functioning and fleshed out character before she and Fred even became friends. Her relationship with Roder and friendships with Cedric & others really helped to develop her character, which made her friendship (and eventual relationship) with Fred more believable and pleasant.

And I am such a fan of Vicki's friendship with Cedric - besides her interactions with Fred, her friendship with Cedric has made me enjoy your story even more. It's weird to say, but your incorporation of Cedric in this story has made me care about his character more (something that JK failed to do). I'm actually going to be very upset when he is murdered, but I am so glad we got to see more of his character throughout this story through his friendship with Vicki.

Kudos to you for doing such a great job in the conception of this story. You're a talented writer and did such a great job in creating a realistic original character! I hope you're doing well. 3

Thanks for the update!

Excited to find out what happens next!

Great chapter!

I hope you update soon! This story is so good