Reviews for Don't You Go
hodhod2011danger chapter 10 . 1/9/2017
I like Rafe as a character and the way you wrote him was amazing it got me to love him more. I wished his story in the game went out the same way you wrote it. Awesome story!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/14/2016
Thank you, oh thank you. It's so hard to find great Rafe fanfiction especially since his name isn't in the character list (which irritates me to no end). But I just binge read the whole thing and absolutely loved it. Your second person is also very well done, which is amazing as it is in my opinion the hardest to write.
Rafe was also in character! People have such a hard time writing him because he's so complex, but I think you did awesome. I also thought that your main character was excellent, and was unique and all her own. I absolutely loved your story. :)
YikesForever chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
I love this more than I love bagels... And I love my bagels
Kuon chapter 9 . 8/13/2016
I love that Rafe's character is getting so much attention. Saw this fic on tumblr and had to reply here.

Will be interesting to read him making amends with Sully, Sam and Nathan. Though I don't see how Nathan could after everything that went down.
Rocket chapter 7 . 8/2/2016
Sorry
Wrote the last review before reading chapter 7
Rocket chapter 7 . 8/2/2016
I am totally in love with this fanfic! Hipe you will continue this with (many) more chapters...
I dont know if you thought about it but i would love to read that they meet sam and/or nathan. And that they're like "you are alive?!" Or something like that...
Sorry for any grammar mistake
Emilyackles chapter 7 . 7/31/2016
Oh my god!this chapter is so beautiful!i love that moments
meg1124 chapter 7 . 7/30/2016
What an amazing chapter! I loved the interaction with Rafe and his past. I know sam said that once he works out his stuff he can contact him, and i dont know hiw long you plan to make this story, but I would love to see more interactions between everyone.
Supposes Erroneously chapter 6 . 7/27/2016
I am so glad I found this story. And that it's still being updated! Really loving Rafe's character development. He's still the cocky guy from Uncharted but he's grown so much! Can't wait for the chapters to come 3
catspats31 chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
The writing quality is fine and dandy, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Remove every single element related to the reader and replace them all with a canon character or original character. You must switch to the first person or third person point of view. Alternatively, you can move it to a site where it's allowed like Archive Of Our Own.
HippyElephant chapter 4 . 7/17/2016
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HippyElephant chapter 2 . 7/13/2016
Is it getting hot in here or is it just me? XD love it :D
HippyElephant chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
I like it :D looking forward to an update Xx