Reviews for Forged Destiny
handwran chapter 1 . 20h
wtf is with the insane assholes in this comment section. good lord there are some garbage pieces of shit commenting trash here
Guest chapter 157 . 7/19
Jesus fucking Christ... This is the worst fucking thing I've ever READ. How the fuck can you be in your damned THIRTIES and write like a FOUR YEAR OLD WITH BRAIN DAMAGE!?
I could write a 300-page essay that details how awful this story is and the relentlessly awful ways it is told, but I'm just going to quote one of my friends, who somehow managed to read through about ten chapters of this garbage:
"'How the fuck did this fic last past this chapter?'"
...Is a thought that I've had for each of the last eight chapters. And it keeps getting worse. And it's hard to figure out what part is the worst because it's all the worst."
Really, it's hard to break it down any further than that.
To anyone who's going through the reviews: Please. Do yourself a favour and STOP. Every paragraph of this revulsing scum penned down by an even worse scum atrophies your body and ACCELERATES THE DEATH OF YOUR NEURONS.
Instead, you should read the fics made by those wonderful people:
I luvgrace420
Troumvirate
Kream45
Mr grimjaw
Those guys are thousands of orders of magnitude above Coeur. Give their stories a try.
AND KILL YOURSELF COUER. I FELT SO HAPPY WHEN YOUR DOG DIED, I HOPE YOUR MOM'S CANCER RELAPSES AND KILLS HER TOO YOU DISGUSTING PIG!
jetjedi chapter 2 . 7/18
Fav
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17
To the guest on July 12th insulting the author about they’re dog. F*** you.
alexquack99 chapter 157 . 7/17
This fic was amazing. Your writing is well thought out and made me feel all sorts of different emotions ranging from intrigue, anguish, and contentment. I'm a fan of your other stories too. I honestly think that you could write a best selling book.
Kyprioths crow chapter 127 . 7/17
Loving the story so far, but maybe copy MC's stats more often? Only putting them up when he leveled was fine when he was leveling every other chapter, but I just had to go all the way back to book 7 to find them.
alexquack99 chapter 94 . 7/16
I'm glad that Cinder turned out to actually be good. Really made me feel good inside but I was still sad about what happened to her
alexquack99 chapter 92 . 7/16
I fucking knew it. I swear to god I saw Cinder's betrayal coming. Holy shit this fic is so good
Simplyhiccstrid chapter 157 . 7/12
God this was a great story!
Guest chapter 157 . 7/12
Who cares about your dog, its reasons lile this that people will flock to the stories by "I luvgrace420" and "mr grimjaw" because they dont stop writing cuz of a stupid dead dog.

Grow up.,.
Thefallenjedi66 chapter 146 . 7/7
Me? oh ho ho, im am just but a Revanat
Lord Matthew chapter 157 . 7/6
Greatest RWBY FanFiction I've read till date. Thanks for your work!
Koema chapter 157 . 7/6
Loved the humor in the last chapter! That was a great way to wrap it up! I was laughing laughing the whole time! But dang! Wow! What an awesome fic! I feel sad that it’s over and I’m done reading it! It really was a long, immersive and engaging story! I loved every bit of it! (I do wish I knew more about where Salem came from, but that’s unimportant) very well done and thank you for writing it!
Koema chapter 149 . 7/4
Such a bad ass chapter! I loved seeing this through Ruby’s eyes! The intensity and slow motion was incredible! Loved every word!
Thefallenjedi66 chapter 132 . 7/2
god DAMN! THAT'S A WOMAN RIGHT THERE!
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