Reviews for Alternative Tale: Naruto The Storm Flash |
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Mariusz1988 chapter 12 . 2/3/2019 A good story. A good build up. Can't wait to see more of Naruto/hinata development. Ewan Sasuke/sakura was a surprise. |
AlphaWolf02 chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 Love the story. Maybe hiashi married her off to naruto?..or someone else.. ooh please keep up the fantastic work |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2018 Want to read the story but naruhina just throws it out the window for me great concept great writing but the pairing is just garbage |
OMEGASUPER0w0 chapter 12 . 6/16/2018 MORE PLES WE LIKE THIS |
NeKo19-94 chapter 12 . 2/28/2017 Next plis |
True Ouroboros chapter 12 . 1/11/2017 Good story, can't wait to see more |
Guest chapter 12 . 12/1/2016 The ones welcoming Hinata? I am guessing it's Kushina XD - KuroiOozora |
Guest chapter 8 . 12/1/2016 And here I was hoping Naru would get a curse mark too, but I guess not.. Oh well.. XD - KuroiOozora |
arinasution5 chapter 12 . 11/22/2016 Go |
DGMSilverAirHead03 chapter 12 . 11/13/2016 Interesting chapter can't wait for an update! |
BlackDragonShinigami chapter 12 . 11/2/2016 ? Please update. Bye bye |
Layperson chapter 5 . 11/2/2016 lame |
XXX Chaos Breaker XXX chapter 12 . 11/1/2016 This is good story I am still waiting to see if this is better then the first one nothing really new yet but I do like how your developing your character |
Kamhal chapter 11 . 11/1/2016 When is the next chapter? TT_TT |
Aeroshadowclone chapter 11 . 9/23/2016 ok, so i decided to read it all first and then review. I like this story. I need a little more action,but it's good. Character development ia good and the fact that you spes things up is really nice. It's really tiring to read stories that parallel cannon...usually it takes ppl forever and then they quit. I'm looking dorwars to the fight scenes. since you said you werent too comfortable w them, i recommens looming at the story sealed kunai by kenchi618 [i think thats his id] he has really good fight scenes. |