Reviews for Alternative Tale: Naruto The Storm Flash
Mariusz1988 chapter 12 . 2/3/2019
A good story. A good build up. Can't wait to see more of Naruto/hinata development. Ewan Sasuke/sakura was a surprise.
AlphaWolf02 chapter 1 . 7/12/2018
Love the story. Maybe hiashi married her off to naruto?..or someone else.. ooh please keep up the fantastic work
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2018
Want to read the story but naruhina just throws it out the window for me great concept great writing but the pairing is just garbage
OMEGASUPER0w0 chapter 12 . 6/16/2018
MORE PLES WE LIKE THIS
NeKo19-94 chapter 12 . 2/28/2017
Next plis
True Ouroboros chapter 12 . 1/11/2017
Good story, can't wait to see more
Guest chapter 12 . 12/1/2016
The ones welcoming Hinata? I am guessing it's Kushina XD

- KuroiOozora
Guest chapter 8 . 12/1/2016
And here I was hoping Naru would get a curse mark too, but I guess not.. Oh well.. XD

- KuroiOozora
arinasution5 chapter 12 . 11/22/2016
Go
DGMSilverAirHead03 chapter 12 . 11/13/2016
Interesting chapter can't wait for an update!
BlackDragonShinigami chapter 12 . 11/2/2016
? Please update. Bye bye
Layperson chapter 5 . 11/2/2016
lame
XXX Chaos Breaker XXX chapter 12 . 11/1/2016
This is good story I am still waiting to see if this is better then the first one nothing really new yet but I do like how your developing your character
Kamhal chapter 11 . 11/1/2016
When is the next chapter? TT_TT
Aeroshadowclone chapter 11 . 9/23/2016
ok, so i decided to read it all first and then review. I like this story. I need a little more action,but it's good. Character development ia good and the fact that you spes things up is really nice. It's really tiring to read stories that parallel cannon...usually it takes ppl forever and then they quit. I'm looking dorwars to the fight scenes. since you said you werent too comfortable w them, i recommens looming at the story sealed kunai by kenchi618 [i think thats his id] he has really good fight scenes.
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