Such a great story. I won't lie it's kind of creepy and scary to think about something like that happening
The Dragon1010

You need to come up with a catchier title so more readers will read your story. This is amazing

Wow. That was acually a really powerful story. You transported your readers to a world that you controlled, and captivated them there with your vivid descriptions. Hallucination can be a terrifying thing, and your portrayal was spot on. Thank you for writing this.

Oh man! When toothless says i will never leave you while thinking about httyd 3. Tears. Why cant they add beautiful moments like the ones you wrote in the rtte show. Loved your story! I really did! Hoping for another one!

Sweet . . . Really great story! Amazing!

I'm just going to pretend that I didn't end up sobbing during this chapter...

Or that the whole story was so amazing and tore at my heart.

Your writing is amazing and this story was as well. :)

Alyss Mainwaring

Please don't tell me he will be dead, that would be stupid, to come this far and so on, and then die, the poison would only make him see things as i understood it couldn't kill him, so please don' t kill him, make a happy ending, i know this is just a fanfiction, and there is so much of happy endings in movies and everything, but real life doesn't end happy often and so many happy endings just make my heart warmer, thia is just a fic, and it is your choice, but i think it would be cooler to end it with everything pretty fine, of course he could suffer and all, but don't make him die :(

HE CAN'T HAVE DIED! Well, he could but . . . That is a really depressing thought.
Please update soon, I cannot wait for the ending! Wellm do I really want to know . . . Well, yes I do! Update soon!

Oh no... Please tell me he gets better :0

damn it. I'm so hooked on this story that I think I just missed a train reading this amazing chapter

Yay thanks a sad ending . :D happy endings are so overdone nowadays .

Are they gonna die ? Or at least Be different because if are permanently changed that would be awesome . And as for the last line I hope it's not something pathetic like a smothering smoke breath or a rouge dragon rider of that village who went mad and as tuffnut said burnt down the entire village and created this myth of him scaring people.

Curses. Why the cliffhangers? These are really driving me up the wall.
I really hope the others come fast. They'll see the horrible thing that's going on, they'll come in with their dragons, blast the entire thing apart, then deal with the injued Toothless and hallucinating Hiccup, the end. Then again, you have a way of making the most unexpected plot twists!
Please update soon, this is amazing, and all that good stuff.

I kept going past this story unsure to read it or not.

I'm so glad that I ended up doing so. I have goosebumps and can't wait for the next chapter!

Aly

I need more! this is chilling!