I love this story please keep writing chapters and I don’t think you should reboot this story because it is very very very good

So I just finished reading this and I have to say it’s solid. I like that the Ginyu Force turned good. It’s hard to find stories like that for some reason so I’m glad to see this. Bardock was always a good character that needed more time.

The reboot will be wonderful and unnecessary.

Go for it!

This sounds interesting I would not mind reading the full story of this.

I like it, it shows Bardock's determination to avenge his people no matter what. Though how do you plan on having Bardock survive in space?

I think this reboot would be quite nice, especially if all chapters would be like this. Its a bit rough around the edges, but all ideas show these displeasing features at first. This feels a lot more refined then what you have currently posted. I honestly think if enough time is invested, this remake could become a big hit. Go for it!

Oh, hoo-hoo! I am intrigued by this re-write test! :D

Dont half ass two things whole ass one thing

I like that you gave numbers. They problem is you said you made them tougher. I think you made Krillin, Guldo, and Gohan stronger than the series, but the rest weaker than they should have been. For instance, Goku's base was 90k, and Captain Ginu's power was 120k. That doesn't take into account the boost Goku got for almost dying. Yes, there are others there, but their power levels were much weaker. As I said, this is one area where I think your off. I still like it overall, but the numbers being so much weaker for most of the z fighters hurts some.

There are only two things I don't like about this fic so far. The first, the gravity should only have been 100 max, not 500. Goku's base was 90k with training at 100 and he could barely make 100. The 500g training and than having all their power unlocked should make them much stronger than they were in the series. They only seemed comparable to Goku alone. The second thing I hated relates to something I like. I like you killed Goku as it makes sense to go after him. I agree that Krillin would just cry. But Gohan, the rage king, just cries as well? I wouldn't think SS, but he needed to do something there.

Also known as: Vision of Change, but 10 times worse, with everyone’s favorite, out of character, altruistic, Bardock.
Yaaaay

Why'd you stop this story?

Bit disjointed... but the premise is strong.

Hell to the no.