| Reviews for Ash's harem teaM |
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   brasheril-holmestalentsmaster chapter 1 . 6/12 You call this many the biggest harem in FanFiction history?! Oh my sweet summer child... You know what those numbers are? Rookie numbers I tell you. Now, joking aside, I'm really interested to see how you'll develop this story. So you got yourself at least one attentive reader to your story. |
| JCarrasco chapter 10 . 11/24/2019 Keep it up I love this story please. |
| Exodia3215 chapter 10 . 10/26/2019 Great story so far! Hope you can update soon! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2019 I forgot to add to the list for Sinnoh Ursula one of Dawn's rivals and that princess that looked like Dawn who gave her the Togekiss. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2019 For Kanto I suggest Sabrina, Erika, and Greta and Anabell from the battle fronteir for Johto I suggest Whitney, Karen, Bailey from flower power, Liza the care taker of the charicific valley, Miki the girl with the that Ash fought with his Cyndaquil Arielle the girl from where the whistle stops and Macy for Hoenn I suggest Flannery, Wynona, Phoebe, Glacia, Julie, Natasha from what you seed is what you get from the game winning assist, for Sinnoh I suggest Maylene, Angie, Candice, Fantina, Gardenia for unova I suggest Elesa, Skyla, Roxie, Sheanel, Caitlen, Carlita, for Kalos I would add Diantha, Olympia, Alexia, Malva, and Drasna |
| Nathan626 chapter 10 . 7/27/2019 Keep it up with the good work |
| Nathan626 chapter 8 . 7/25/2019 what about Ash and lusamine |
| Nathan626 chapter 1 . 7/23/2019 What about the female villains |
| William1999 chapter 1 . 12/13/2018 Zinnia because she was a vital part of the delta episode |
| CreeperKIllermmo chapter 1 . 11/22/2018 When will you be updating miraculous birth |
| DedsecHacks chapter 6 . 10/2/2018 first of all, I disagree with the fact that ASH had to apologise to them not THEM apologizing to ash. Overall the storyline is good but it is unrealistic when you are the one betrayed and yet you have to seek their forgiveness. I feel for ash but he should stand firm and the others should be desperate to apologise to him. Keep up the good work |
| MasterBrattan chapter 1 . 9/7/2018 Kanto Cassandra (the girl with the Parasect) Honestly, in all the stories I've read, she has yet to be used. |
| CrazyMowi chapter 10 . 8/23/2018 Amazing history |
| tsun chapter 3 . 8/21/2018 it's hard to read. need beta but so far, I like what happened. alola is finish? is lilie part of harem? I liked lilie most in alola girls, then there is also . |
| Jim chapter 2 . 8/17/2018 This is all but unreadable. I want to like it but all the grammar mistakes mean it is to difficult to read. Please edit and reupload. |
