Reviews for Grave Mistake |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please please update |
![]() ![]() Please update ? ;; |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably my favourite DGM fanfic now. I really like any GoodNeah fanfics. |
![]() ![]() Please. Please continue... I beg... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continuala |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if you'll continue this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() And just like that Musician started playing when I finished the chapter XD.I want to know whats gonna happen but hey looking at da date looks like you aint gonna update great |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story, between Necromancer Allen, Nea's presence, Allen's magic, and being able to read Allen's inner thoughts! I hope you plan to continue this, I feel very curious about how it will develop, and if/when Nea will be discovered! |
![]() ![]() This was a really interesting take on Allen an Neah, and how they could interact under better circumstances. And having Allen be aware of magic adds a cool extra level to what he can do. Loved watching him try to puzzle out Kandas curse. I do hope you get a chance to continue this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update this story soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg yes. I loved your idea of making Allen be able to use magic! I always wondered why Cross didn't teach him so I'm glad to see this fic! Update soon~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, very much so. I'd like to see how this plays out. |
![]() ![]() That is one part that has always bugged me: those 'great generals' 'overseers' people...what on earth are they doing there? We don't really see them again and there aren't really representatives from Central around the European Branch until later. And they aren't on call for when an exorcist arrives since Allen (and presumably others) appeared out of no where with no warning and they are obviously not stalking around the EB building or spending all their time in that small room. I always had a sinking feeling that they just grabbed some finders and dressed them up in ominous robes to scare the new exorcists... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this story! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I only just started this but I love it already! It's great! Thank you for writing it! |