Reviews for With the Dark |
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Guest chapter 2 . 5/28 Oh Jesus Christ... Illya. What have you unleashed. The only way this could be worse is if you summoned the second chosen undead. |
Guest chapter 12 . 5/22 I enjoy this story, and your take on Undead Saber, and Artorias and Ornstein. Chester though... Chester is a prick. There is no reason for him to be so compliant. And Shirou seem a bit too naive and cheerful. I get that this is an AU, but I feel like the two main protagonists of Fate/Stay Night should stay the same personality-wise. Still, I like this fic and would like to see it finished. |
Guest chapter 12 . 4/13 They only let characters into smash if they originate from videogames. They can't come from other platforms, even if they're included in a videogame later on. |
eto.tbma chapter 12 . 11/20/2019 Блядь, как же я ненавижу этого гребанного рыжего ублюдка. Честно, произведение отличное, но невозможно читать без гнева и злости, когда в тексте упоминается эта рыжая тварь. Я так обрадовался, когда увидел, что Saber умер и Широ списали со счетов. Но автор умеет неприятно удивлять. Широ Эмия - единственная причина по которой я ненавижу Fate/stay night, а также связанные с этим персонажем фанфики. |
Thekiller7 chapter 12 . 10/12/2019 Lot's of lore drop and reveals in this chapter Also Kirei is dead, congrats on making such a divergence |
Thekiller7 chapter 11 . 10/12/2019 It's a shame there is so little in canon DS lore to go off of the many characters. But you manage to do a great job at characterizing them. |
Thekiller7 chapter 10 . 10/12/2019 Looking back, instead ofPharis, you know who could be an Archer and play off Rin? Gwyndolin for the trap humor. Also because he's bemoan how much weaker he is compared to being summoned as Caster |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/12/2019 Gehrman has no chill And Shinji is in over his head |
Thekiller7 chapter 6 . 10/11/2019 Gherman Rider HAHAHAHAHA! Boy will Rin be surprised when he stands up |
Thekiller7 chapter 5 . 10/11/2019 Well this is a change of pace. Gad you're deviating from canon |
Thekiller7 chapter 4 . 10/11/2019 Ornstein as Lancer? That's a given |
Thekiller7 chapter 3 . 10/11/2019 Chester is an odd choice here, nothing really special about him. Gough would be a better choice for Archer, Pharis seems a better one. He's famous in the background and has a Bow with amazing range to work off of |
Thekiller7 chapter 2 . 10/11/2019 Do you have a Servant Sheet or general idea of Artorias' stats? |
doubledamn chapter 12 . 9/22/2019 Could we get an Omake or Bonus Chapter of Gehrman running into a Dead Apostle and being s overy insulted that this base creature would dare claim to be an Envoy of Flora, to one such as him who has spent decades (centuries?) holding back the Moon Presence? |
doubledamn chapter 10 . 9/22/2019 Is that ranking best to worst, or worst to best? |