Reviews for The Dragon and the Vampire
leo0074 chapter 5 . 11/4/2019
Man, this story is so enjoyable and well written. I’m sad that there hasn’t been any updates recently, but god I don’t get tired of re-reading it again and again...
Guest chapter 3 . 10/17/2019
After all he was just a human (400 years ago that is, but now he's a demon dragon hybrid with no semblane of being human)
and she was...
EtheriousLogia chapter 5 . 3/1/2018
UPDATETETTETETE
zubhanwc3 chapter 5 . 1/6/2018
the story is a bit confusing and random, and this is coming from somebody that enjoys both fandoms, but it isn't to the extreme, so I will give it that. my biggest problem was how chapter 3 ended and how chapter 4 went, but aside from that, the story seems to be progressing in an interesting fashion.
DdraigTrueEmperor9 chapter 5 . 9/4/2017
This was a good chapter.
Teal enjoying how things are going, more so with Natsu and Leticia is slowly progressing.
She isn't opposed to having Natsu as her husband so that is a plus.

Until the next chapter.
FrozenOzean21 chapter 3 . 8/28/2017
her husband
BlackDragonShinigami chapter 5 . 8/14/2017
Nice story
Barbatos rex chapter 5 . 8/8/2017
great chapter can't wait for the next one
SilentSniper05 chapter 5 . 8/8/2017
Nice, im really glad you are taking all this time to deal with character development. Althiugh the pace is slow it shows the development between the two of them perfectly in my opinion. Great story overall so far, i will see you soon, i hope.
karnaes chapter 5 . 8/8/2017
I'm waiting new update!
TheLaughingStalk chapter 5 . 8/7/2017
This is cool, thanks again for the uodate
Shiro Kurai chapter 5 . 8/7/2017
Was a fun read, were a few grammar mistakes though. To help I posted them below with what I would change them to. Hope this helps D.

He never actually thought that she would do that which resulted him to return her back to the sofa and have her rest by herself. - He never actually thought that she would do that which resulted in him to return her back to the sofa and have her rest by herself. (Just a missing connecting word.)

were greeted with a bunch of mannequin displays, most of it are maid clothes. - were greeted with a bunch of mannequin displays, most of them were maid clothes. (Maybe? You were talking in a plural and past tense and not a singular and present.)

Mirajane used in her time as head waitress. - Mirajane used in her time as the head waitress.

There were no such decision of him being their pack mule. - There were no such decisions of him being their pack mule. (This can also be written as "There was no such decision of him being their pack mule." Depends on how you are writing, singular or plural.)

the black ribbon that she worn from her last outfit. - the black ribbon that she wore from her last outfit.

colors of the outfit blends as well to her nature as a vampire - colors of the outfit blend as well to her nature as a vampire (Would also personally change "as well to" - "well with" Isn't wrong but just preference.)

He explained just before they could ask for more questions. - He explained just before they could ask more questions.

the load isn't that much heavy - the load isn't that heavy (Just sounds better personally.)

Erza have expended more jewels than any of the group - Erza has expended more jewels than any of the group

I wouldn't have experience these things if you didn't come to me - I wouldn't have experienced these things if you didn't come to me

please take care of me from now on." She bowed which made him startled in the process. - please take care of me from now on." She bowed which had startled in the process. (Preference)

they continued tp spend their time together to the rest of the night - they continued to spend their time together to the rest of the night

Also, suggest trying to keep a constant flow of American or British writing and not switching between both.

May seem to be nitpicky but I believe that we should always mention others faults so they can learn from them. Till next time D.
Etherious Natsu Dragneel chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Since Leticia's a vampire, shouldn't she have black hair? She'd be more beautiful with black hair.
Azure dragon king chapter 4 . 3/17/2017
great story hope you continue it
RionKunosagi chapter 4 . 3/12/2017
Oi Weird, its been weeks, Update, I know you have a busy schedule and shit but seriously I fucking love this story and I hate the fact that you havent updated it! If you dont update Ill hate you forever! Like seriously! Thats one of your million fans gone! Just please update
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