Wow wow wow... I know I am late to the game on this story, but this is AMAZING! Writing, storyline, etc... Just incredible!

Your story frustrated the hell out of me with it's avoidance all of the time with no payoff. You need to give the reader an idea that progress is happening and I'm already at chapter 12 and it seems like they're no closer than they were 10 chapters ago. I know this might be my frustration with slow burn but the story is good, but I find myself just waiting for the payoff now. Like them finally talking or Beca finally deciding to stop drinking and partying but every time the story makes progress, it regresses back. Personally I find it frustrating but I admit you can do slow burn well and the story is very good. I will continue to read though even if I have to take breaks

Ugh, they deserve the world and more! Bechloe is the best end-game ever!

Okay, just finished reading this chapter and it was fucking awesome! I mean for the 'first time sex' scene. Like I can't even put into words how fucking amazing it was. How you word the scene, it's not just turned me on. It's MORE than that. Their emotions, their thoughs at the moment, hits me in a way that I can't describe, yet I can totally relate to it. Lol, pardon my english. Just want you to know that it's easy to be turned on reading sex scenes, but it's not easy to make readers feel more than that. Again, sorry cuz I can't describe it better (English not my first language). You are awesome for that :D

Oh wow I invested more emotions into this than I thought I would have to!

this will be the 2nd time to read this. just want to hurt my bechloe heart for a few moments again. and make it blossom after a few chapters. the same feeling im feeling even after re reading it.

I'm wondering why I just stumbled into this story now. this is crazily amazing! totally gonna change the list of my most favorite PP FF! I think you just jumped up to number one!
and the way you're writing it, the flowing sentence into paragraph? beautifully done.

Chloe gave her a big, sloppy kiss on the lips, (From chapter1)
Arent they friends? I am confused.

Estoy bastante enganchada a tu fic, lo amo!

Omg dude.. That was like an epic adventure! Damn i can't believe it's over.

This story is so good! I really wanted Jungle Gym to be an actual song though :/

I've never laughed out loud to a fan fiction story before. I love you. I seriously love you

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Yes...I want to konw that too...the answer to the Tomboi253 question...because I would really like to hear that. The idea is amazing ;)

Is there An actual song you based jungle gym off of?