I have been binge reading this story from chapter 1 since this morning, and the strange part is... I'VE NEVER PLAYED OVERWATCH! (Still stuck with a Playstation 3! Sigh... the unfairness of life). Either way, this story is addictive. One thing I like about your stories putting Naruto in a modern or futuristic world... his world takes a backseat.

Swear to god! I LOVED the Naruto series and Naruto as a character... he's not broody like Ichigo nor childish like Luffy or naive like Natsu, Naruto's the perfect balance of cheerfulness with a sense of a soldier... but for gods sake! Naruto's characters are NOT the ultimate bad-asses! They're actually VERY WEAK in the broader scope of anime worlds, I mean the Shinigami in Bleach are literal GODS whom manipulate time and space on a daily basis with the Captains wielding such powers it has to be RESTRICTED in a SPIRIT WORLD due to how destructive it is, Luffy regularly punches people through freaking mountains, and Natsu's Breath Attack literally EVAPORATED a freaking LAKE, Hell at the beginning he obliterated half of Hargeon in Episode 1! How many characters in Naruto have shown THAT level of destructive power?! Hell, Jubi and Momoshiki's ultimate attacks were just village crushers, Hargeon's a freaking major city and Karakura's like a damn metropolis! Pretty freaking sure Nel would have used Cero Doble to gobble up Jubi's Bijudama and then obliterated it from existence with a Cero, and pretty sure the Shinigami's powers would make sure a Biju stayed dead... for good. Yet everyone drags Naruto's world into these crossovers and makes them out to be badasses... especially the Akatsuki... everyone thinks Madara's a freaking god... more like a fool who got played... by a black... blob... thing. Hell I read one story where KAKUZU was running shit in the outside world! He and Hidan were portrayed as if they were freaking Darkseid or Thanos in terms of bad-assery!

Sooooooooooooooooo glad that doesn't happen in your stories, but love how you incorporate multiple crossovers together (not the whole Naruto Uzumaki Senju Sparda thing from your HotD and DxD crossovers, but your other mass crossover elements are awesome).

Interesting story, though I think since you're having Naruto join neither Overwatch nor Talon, you could and should have used some Triage X material, Black Label was an awesome concept and would fit nicely into this story. Plus having him with Mikoto Kiba, Sayo Hitsugi, and Oriha Nashida would be awesome, ESPECIALLY Oriha! Her first appearance was hilarious! Though I guess it would be a problem since Black Label has a Miki too, Miki Tsurugi, who is another bad-ass woman. Would have also loved to see Naruko instead of Harley, no offense, but the recent depictions of Harley Quinn have been off-putting, in the Arkham game series, she's far more of a loyal bitch to Joker than she was in the comic, the recent Harley Quinn cartoon series... it has great jokes and I love Ivy's voice actress but Harley's voice actress makes it near impossible to stomach... it's like when Akeno Himejima was portrayed as a valley girl in the first DxD dub... voice sounded sexy but the valley girl accent and slang just ruined her, and the same applies to Harley, the jokes are good, but with her sounding like a loud young Rosanne Barr, it ruined the quality of the punchline. As for Margot Robbie... sorry, she doesn't do it for me. She acted more like a dumb slut with a slight Bronx accent than a bat-shit crazy Jersey Girl, Harley head butting glass barriers going 'Crazy huh?' was a Hell of a lot more entertaining than 'We're bad guys, it's what we do!'. So yeah, could have gone for Naruko instead... plus I like how you often portray Naruko, especially in your DxD crossovers, she almost seems like a more mischievous and cunning Harley Quinn.

I also think you should have added Jinx and Ahri from LoL into the mix, I've never seen ANYONE use Jinx in a Naruto story which kind of blows my mind... she's like Hatsune Miku turned into a drugged out gun-crazy slut! Plus the idea of someone so small and petite wielding an arsenal of firearms is so ridiculous it's hilarious! More hilarious than Harley Quinn doing it!

Otherwise, it's a great story. Like the idea of Naruto being neither with Overwatch or Talon, Talon's too reckless for an organization and Overwatch is the UN's bitch (whom I dislike btw, the UN, I mean). Like the idea of incorporating other crossover elements, like Sekirei (would have loved to see Uzume in his harem, have her find out that Chiho was being poisoned by Talon and join him to get revenge), but MBI fit perfect into the storyline as did the SAO elements.

looking forward to the next chapter and not the filler oneChristmas chapters were good )

Damnt you for put drama to this story why just don't make hinata find naruto and the rescue tracer from ed III arghh total drama

Alright dude, I'm no evil super genius who is a part of an evil organization that wants to take over the world but if you're gonna wipe someone's memory and turn them into a weapon shouldn't you fully wipe the memory before you start enhancing him in anyway? I get that it was a convenient way for you to ensure that Naruto adapts fast with the new environment but was it worth the plot holes? This is gonna bug me every time I try to read this story.

Did she borrow Vanguard-1 from the Hardys?

When is the next Chapter?

Yeah I'm sorry man. Story is not for me. Just some parts here and there that I don't really enjoy. Well good luck anyway

If you’ve watched Wolverine vs Raiden death Battle, it shows that Raiden’s sword CAN cut through vibranium.

Dang 166 cm? That’s short as hell

Why do people like this garbage its just a Frankenstein of a crossover that makes little to no sense.

You nerfed naruto as well. Let me remind you that he had his neck snapped, stabbed multiple times been impaired by chakra rods by pain all over his body and still survive and conscious but here his wound reopens for three seconds and fall unconscious. Are you serious right now? Naruto has a high pain tolerance and suffered more deadly injuries and survived but you make him incredibly weak by going unconscious just because his wound reopen. Then you make an excuse saying the droid negated his healing? I swear its like you forgot everything about naruto and his abilities. Never had naruto once lost his healing abilities even when orochimaru applied the Five Element seal he still had his healing factor. You need to get you facts straight

Dude your seriously getting everything wrong about chakra. The “Rocket proof” glass he was hiding behind could’ve easily been shattered using a Rasengan. If Kakuzu fully took on a full tailed beast Bomb and still survived with barley any damage then that window would’ve easily been destroyed. Not only that but the Rasengan not destroying the droid is so stupid and you made up an excuse of saying its absorbs vibrational energy... are you an idiot the Rasengan isn’t vibration energy it isn’t made of sound it’s pure chakra manipulation and there is no way that the droid can absorb it. I hate how you downplay chakra and it’s abilities it’s so irritating reading this and downplaying it’s powers

The one thing I absolutely hate about this story is how easy you made it to get chakra. It doesn’t make sense for them to study chakra as it is spiritual energy not only that but if they had chakra suppressing darts and they used it on naruto that means the seal would’ve weakened and the kyuubi should’ve at least taken over. Then you had them take the life force of the old lady that revived garaa? How the hell can they study life force? That is what I hat about this sorry to many inaccuracies on how they got chakra but other than that it’s an enjoyable story to read

Why is Hinata part of the story. God I hate her