Lol I admit that I like this story, always felt like the Honoka from dead or alive was based a little too obviously off of the love live one. This was a cute story and the little premise was very amusing, not to mention sweet especially at the end.

Two Honoka's indeed. and I definitely liked the HonoKoto moments indeed. Tbh, they have chemistry more than KotoUmi since some of it are forced. :3. But yeah... I'll keep it short, yet sincere compliment. I love on how you make this moment amazing and I definitely wanted to read a Momiji x Ayane x Kasumi threesome soon. :3. Its been awhile for me in the DoA franchise and I could say that they are cute as well. Chemistry is matched!

Well, well, Li'l Lily...

HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches!

This was *SO* friggin' cute. Oh my God, this was just...X'3 This was absolutely *adorbz* and delightfully silly. XD

HonoKoto and ErUmi on a double date is awesome in and off itself, but then, another "Hono" shows up and cue shenanigans~! 8D Oh my God, dem shenanigans, yesh! XD From Kotori-chan groping the wrong waifu to her fainting and then, dat adowable ending...just...awesome. :'3

Great work~! This was awesome! *O*

Semper-Fi! Carry on!