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Sadly, I don't get on this site anymore. Though I don't necessarily want to, unfortunately I've had to say goodbye.

-LemonLimeMaid xoxo

You need to put a warning for rape. This is a rape fic

Love it

While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Remove the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain on this site, or try to upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.

I liked a great many thing about this piece. Where it started perhaps rather dull (with regular disinterested-at-class scene), you had a marvellous build-up to the point where they got, well, intimate. It lacked nothing nor had it anything too much. Also, points for using the 1st person!
What you acknowledge is that the end was a little rushed. Then again, what impresses again is the 1st person and characterization. She's a virgo girl, more or less willingly taken for the first time. I think you describe her feelings well! Like, yeah. It hurts before it gets better.
This story is good work, even if you rushed it. Nice!

Great story!

I realllllyyy wanted to know how Zero would react when he woke up though!

Keep it up!