i loved this chapter. when odine reacts to laguna's miss-speach well that has to be one of the funniest things ive ever read

I'm reading this story for the second time, and I realized it's a very sad conclusion. I don't know why you made it so that Rinoa leaves Squall to be with Seifer even when he's admitted his love for her. I thought it's what she wanted? Plus, he deserved to know the truth.

What a wonderfully written story. I liked how you got every character's perspectives and you seemed to have a really good grasp on their thoughts.I don't normally appreciate first person narrative stories but I do like yours. Really interesting plot twists, you kept me surprised.

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Most excellent fic! I was hesitant about reading this but I'm glad I did. I'm even thinking of breaking my oath to only read finished fics and start the sequel now. Hurry and finish the sequel!

Hiya! Great story and with quite a different ending. Not your "happily ever after" type stuff.

Well, I'm gonna go read the sequel now.

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Oh man. The ending is so surprising. But it's a nice change from what I've read. This is so good. I'm gonna read your sequel!

I agree with remote mine. Heck, if I was Rinoa and Squall told me that, I would jump into his arms and never let go

Anyways, your fanfic is great. I'm surprises that you don't have a lot more reviews especially with a story like this one.

I'm so going to read 'Oceans Apart' next :D *steals Noacat's words* You rock! :D

Y'know, that's the one thing I don't get. Why the hell would Rinoa deny Squall's love if he actually admitted it? And then breaking her promise. She got what she wanted, and that wasn't enough. *cough*

Sorry it took so long to get around to this. *Sighs* Things have been busy. You're right. It is better than the original. The added material was definitely worth a re-read. Many kudos to you on another job well done. Till next time, take care:)

This is am amazing and well written story :) heartwarming and heartbreaking in equal measure...

*Runs off to check out 'Oceans Apart'*

...Wonderful! Now Oceans Apart makes more sense. Silly Noacat reading sequels before originals. Anyway, I'm glad I picked this one up. You've done a really marvelous job with this story. And I'm throughly impressed that you managed to make a first person story incredilby interesting and not at all disconcerting or annoying...as most first persons are. You have a heck of a talent to do that...really. Thanks for writing this, really. *claps* You rock!

wow! this story is almost over! it's been great!

Wow. twist after twist ... oh, man. Selphie as a sorceress ... you're right, maybe she'll be the first - completely - benign one ever. Can't imagine her doing anything worse than enchanting puppies.

I love this. Can't wait to see where it goes next.

And thanks for the plug I should update SLG in the next couple days

well...this chapter wasn't as good as the others, but i guess it's ok as long as you updated! thanks for updating! please update again soon!