You did a good job!

This was really good! Bringing back Undergrowth was nice- he was such a powerful ghost that only one episode wasn't enough (much like Dan). I really like your writing style and the whole plot moved seamlessly. Thanks for adding this wonderful literature to the world!

Thanks for writing this! Your writing style is very nice and satisfying to read. I love AU fics where Danny and Sam aren't friends to start out, and this one did not let me down one bit. Good pacing and characterization also.

One thing I wish is that you would have provided more background information on Danny's past. Why is the Ghost Reign such a sore subject for him? Did something happen to his family? Where did all the ghosts go and why is Danny reluctant to be Phantom? While I feel as if this was intentional on your part and is awesome because it allows the reader engage more with the fic and draw their own conclusions (because I know I definitely did!), I would love to see your take on this past, because it definitely sounds interesting! Maybe a prequel, perhaps? ;)

Thanks for a great fic! Keep writing!

Wonderful dynamics in this story. I really really enjoyed it. :)