Reviews for Lost Along the Way: The Beginning |
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WeasleysWidow chapter 24 . 9/16 Glad I got to catch up on Leila. I hope you’re doing well. Miss this fic. Hope you can update soon. |
Homerthe27 chapter 24 . 7/2 Okay, I just read this entire story within a day and I have to say, I love Leila and Harry. Their relationships are sweet and the entire story see their relationship go up and down was so fun to watch, and so very believable. I love that you focus more Slytherin in your fic (the house needs more love) and Leila's gang is nice and tolerable. Malfoy is the one I don't particularly mind in your story, I know he is supposed to be irritating to Leila but I was getting irritated by his presence and I felt that he kinda drags the story down a bit. I haven't read the rest of your Leilaverse but I have seen the community page so I know this criticism won't go anywhere but I thought i should still bring it up. Overall Leila is a very interesting protagonist and she fits in your story very well. Granted your story doesn't have much divination from the books/movies but it is still a fantastic read. I do hope to see Leila's relationship improve with Ron and Hermione so they can be one happy group pf protagonists. But if not more power to you (again i haven't read the rest of the Leilaverse). I don't know if you are ever going to update this story so I won't get my hopes up but so far this is my favorite Harry Potter Fanfiction I have read. So Props to that! |
LeilaPotterMalfo chapter 13 . 5/24 My name is Leila as well, and I've always dreamed of being in Harry Potter. Thanks for making my dreams come true (sort-of)! this has got to be the hundredth time I've read this series! I've read Harry Potter soooo man times, and I've read this more, which is saying something! I love it all, the language use, feelings, pairing... it's AMAZING! |
Guest chapter 24 . 5/15 please update soon. this is my favorite fanfiction |
Guest chapter 24 . 4/17 the worst harry potter twin ever |
Guest chapter 23 . 4/17 do not read this save yourself now |
Guest chapter 22 . 4/17 gawd awful fic here |
Guest chapter 21 . 4/17 stay away from this fic |
Guest chapter 20 . 4/17 shitty oc here |
Guest chapter 19 . 4/17 shitty fic here |
Guest chapter 18 . 4/17 this fic sucks |
Guest chapter 17 . 4/17 this is boring boring boring |
Guest chapter 16 . 4/17 why would you write this much shite |
Guest chapter 15 . 4/17 horrendous fic |
Guest chapter 14 . 4/17 bad story |