Actually, that was kinda heartwarming and perverted at the same time.

It was great but I was surprised to see misty had a penis

fap considered but good story

i thought it was perfect go for the sequal!

In my opinion ash isn't gay I'm fine with it i may be bi I'm not to sure yet but still I believe he just loves someone no one has thought of yet or Mandy someone who has been thought over and rejected or as a last one someone who is already shipped with him such as Serena, dawn, misty, iris

Fanfic or not its nor celadon man

Please put another chapter or part to it but add may with male organs

Isn't it Cerulean instead of Celadon? Please make some corrections.

I can honestly say after reviewing this erotic tale, that you do have skill at writing. However, i feel you pushed the characters from their personalities creating new personas thus making it a completely different story than Pokemon. I think that maybe you should try something else if you're into this homosexuality version of Pokemon. Misty having a penis is so unrealistic and quite repulsing. You have skill, but i'm afraid only very few people might actually be turned on by this. Only very warped homosexuals (which i'm assuming you are because you wrote the damn thing) would pick such a read thus making it not profitable. I'm afraid you need skill in the area of conquering control over sexuality, and therapy definitely wouldn't kill you either.

It was awesome

Technicley it was'nt yaoi

I'm on the weird side of fanfiction again aren't I?

I'm sorry, but what? This is the weirdest thing I've ever read and I've read some pretty weird shit.
How did this idea come to you?

Why did this come to you?

Why does this have so many reviews?!

One of the worst…

Weird...

good one

yo abla espagniol