Reviews for Long lost father
AriReo chapter 12 . 7/8
This right here is an amazing story, I really hope more chapters come out.
Fangtasia21 chapter 7 . 3/2
LOl :) Maes / James talking about swearing? He hadn't heard what his own son could say when he slipped into his mouth.
Silver chapter 12 . 9/4/2019
Keep it up! This is an awesome story. I wonder what will happen next.
ultimatequeenoffandoms chapter 12 . 4/15/2019
omg this is freaking amazing and i love it so much XD also i can't believe he sent Dumbledore a frealing howler thats so perfect XD
ultimatequeenoffandoms chapter 5 . 4/15/2019
Okay this is irrelevant to the story but NärCon? as in the swedish one? are you swedish? bc im swedish, so if you are pm me on tumblr, my url is ultimate-queen-of-fandoms2 bc there's like no swedish fans out there XD
levi.hall.9279 chapter 12 . 2/3/2019
Always enjoying coming back and rereading what you have done and I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter
guhgiog08e9rhiogoiheg98whgiogo chapter 12 . 9/25/2018
Awesome story, can’t wait for more!
Green-Eyed-Night-Fury-Dragon chapter 12 . 8/15/2018
I do like the fact that you're making Dumbledore seem more like a I-have-other-responsibilities-and-don't-always-have-time-to-look-after-Harry Dumbledore than the alternative usual copout of I-was-using-Harry-the-whole-time-in-order-to-make-myself-rich-and-I'm-a-super-evil-villain-hiding-in-plain-site Dumbledore that everyone likes to use and bash on.

There is however, one thing I would like to point out. As far as I'm concerned, the Tri-Wizard Tournament is a tournament with a magical contract, meaning if any of the champions drop out, they loose their magic. How are you going to get Harry out of the tournament then? If that's what you even want to do, anyway. James sent that howler as a hint to Dumbledore and McGonagal to try to find a way to get Harry out of the tournament, or at least, find who put this name in. But, when they do find the perpetrator, how will they break the contract on Harry? Or will they force him to compete?

That will be a bridge to cross when we get to though, so I'm not so worried about it right now. However, I do want to see Harry and the Elric Brothers meet and maybe have them give him a crash course in Alchemy. Harry needs some older brother figures and, while Al may be younger, the Elrics seem like the perfect role models. And building on that, Harry doesn't truly know how families are supposed to work. So, I think it'll be hilarious to see Harry treat Elicia with a mixture of his father's praise, Edward and Alphonse's influence, and a bit of some good ol' Weasley coddling.

All in all, I really like this chapter. Very well thought out and, while I may be a bit concerned and nit-picky, very nicely written with intriguing interactions between Harry and his father and a nice look into what Hogwarts is going through during Harry's absence. I like the idea of the connected trunks so Harry can bring one with him wherever he goes and he can still be close to his father. I'm looking forward to what you're going to write next, keep it up!
Storz chapter 1 . 8/11/2018
I never realized how similar Maes Hughes and James Potter were until I found your clever story! Can't wait to see where it goes
Wolfmoon17 chapter 12 . 8/6/2018
Ahh it’s so good story I want this to continue \(w)/
RavensStag chapter 6 . 8/5/2018
Oh boy oh boy what to do about Roy
RavensStag chapter 5 . 8/5/2018
That ending was cute though
RavensStag chapter 4 . 8/4/2018
I’m really enjoying this story!
RavensStag chapter 3 . 8/4/2018
This is sooooo good
RavensStag chapter 2 . 8/4/2018
This is super adorable
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