Reviews for Seventeen |
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fluffy.pancake.veronica chapter 1 . 6/15 THIS STORY IS AMAZING AND IT'S ONE OF THE BEST ONES I'VE READ, PLEASE CONTINUE IT! |
Alex chapter 17 . 6/11 Best Heathers fanfic ever. I love it |
McFlyandTwinkies chapter 15 . 4/1 I’m rereading your fanfic now doing the social distancing thing and I’ve got lots of time on my hands. I still think this is the best Heathers fanfic ever. I hope you know how good it is. |
trailertrash chapter 17 . 3/10 Seventeen Trailer 2 Carol Lynn [voiceover]: Whatup seniors! The pitch black screen cuts to Carol Lynn on a stand with a bullhorn while the senior class cheer in front of her The class throw their work on a bonfire, cheering as they do so Ben pours a beer from a keg and gives it to Heather Sawyer who downs it Carol, Lexi and Heather walk the halls of Westerburg high school, they are clearly the leaders and they know it too Lexi puts on her lipgloss in front of the bathroom mirror surrounded by admirers Carol Lynn sips a frappuchino tossing her blonde hair over her shoulder, her makeup remains perfect throughout Heather blows out the candles on a birthday cake, beaming as she does so Carol Lynn and Ben dressed in stupid costumes down drinks like it's the only alcohol left on earth Heather and Lexi who are dressed as Wonder Woman and Tinkerbell respectively look on Heather walks down the school hallway when she notices something on the wall Throughout the trailer so far an upbeat pop song has played Now it stops. On the wall there are three memorials For Heather Chandler, Kurt Kelly and Ram Sweeney An eerie tune starts to play Someone pours a blue slushie from the 7-11 machine We see the back of a blonde woman's head who is dressed in red [Jessica Chandler] Someone pulls apart blue and black paper to reveal a copy of Moby Dick We see Veronica Sawyer working at a desk gnawing on pate Someone pulls a cigarette from a carton and uses a lighter Heather walks crying in the rain when a car's headlights come upon her She turns to see... Veronica is getting plates from the cupboard when she hears a familiar voice behind her JD: Hey Veronica JD drinks a slushie while looking ominously through the 7-11 window Veronica's eyes widen and she drops a plate onto the ground where it smashes into dozens of pieces Heather bashes her head against the steering wheel of her car Heather: Fuck me gently with a chainsaw Veronica stares JD down at the dinner table while Heather and the Sawyers eat Veronica [voiceover]: I don't know how you're even alive but leave me and my family the fuck alone Heather sees the car she saw has JD in it Then they're at the 7-11 and he's giving her a slushie which she sips gratefully He pats her on the head in front of Veronica who looks like she wants to rip him into pieces JD is now leaning in close to Veronica with a smirk on his face JD: There is a bigger issue on our hands Heather is standing in the lunchroom with her tray in her hands looking slightly lost [This is after she's fallen out of favor] Lexi and several others facing off against Heather while the school looks on Veronica turns to look at somebody with a red ribbon in her blonde hair apprehensively [Heather Chandler's ghost] Heather closes down a computer with a look of contemplation and dawning horror on her face Heather Macnamara West takes two pills from an M&M's container with her flavored mineral water Phil stands in front of a camera Phil: In 3. 2. 1. Someone kicks a croquet ball with a mallet and the noise sounds like a gunshot A new song starts to play as the following clips are shown plate smashes onto the floor A fist connects to a face [Ben's? Phil's?] A semitruck collides with Heather's car Heather Duke stares with her mouth wide open in shock at something Scoreboard lights shut off [blink and you'll miss it moment seeing Ram and Kurts names] Heather, JD and Phil stare from a dining table at someone whose arrived with Veronica [it's Big Bud but we can't see his face] JD tosses a bomb fuse shaped stress ball from one hand to the other JD: I'd do anything for Veronica and her family Veronica and Heather are both seen running JD walks slowly through a door a gun is slowly lifted and fired the title appears in blood red writing Seventeen We see the sign for Westerburg high school Heather gets out of the car and looks up at it with an expression that says 'kill me now' JD in the car behind her: [fake cheery voice] Have a good day sweetie! Heather moodily drinks her blue slushie in response |
jdveronicachandler1989 chapter 17 . 3/2 Please make more chapters this is my favorite fanfic ever! Love the references! Keep up the good work! |
Christopher chapter 17 . 1/18 Well, I think that Heather is being quite unfair to her mother. I mean, Veronica raised her for seventeen years. And Heather had everything she needed, including such things as Internet connection, mobile phones, etc. Veronica is good mother. I don't see any reason to blame her. Yes, she was hiding the fact that JD was Heather's father, but she literally thought he was dead... It's so unfair, I can't watch it without anger on Heather who betrayed her own mother... Still I wish this fanfic was completed... But it seems as if it is in stasis for some reason. |
Emma chapter 17 . 1/12 Oh god I hate myself so much for not checking if this fic was finished before I read it. God damn it. This is really good though, please finish it some day! |
ly chapter 12 . 12/11/2019 god, this story is fabulous. i almost feel like veronica is being villainized, though? like, jd was a literal psychopath who attempted to murder veronica, plus their whole school; like, it's insanely reasonable for veronica to not want him near heather. idk, maybe i'm reading too much into this, though. point is: great fic! |
The Forgotten Guardian chapter 17 . 11/20/2019 Damn it JD! |
Guest chapter 17 . 10/18/2019 WRITE MORE! This is a really good fan fix and I don’t want it to dieee. Pls continue :3333 |
KatDusk chapter 17 . 8/14/2019 Man I absolutely enjoy this story. Ive actually read this 3 times lol. I hope its not abandoned thoough cuz you havent updated in a while. But oh well I guessm |
tHEaNNOYINGcATT chapter 17 . 6/29/2019 Y'know the second it said Carol Llynn *clears throght* killed herself I jumped off my bed screaming NOoooooo and then I proceeded to pace my room Memes aside love what y,doin here keep it up annexed ... ... ... Wear your seatbelt |
Guest chapter 17 . 6/24/2019 R u kidding me... You expect me to believe she commuted suicide bshhhh no it was daddy boi BTW I love what you doing here. So go to life and say "fuck you" because life suckkkksssss -tHEaNNOYINGcATT Ps I forgot my password uwu |
HunterBinx333 chapter 17 . 5/5/2019 PLEASE CONTINUE! |
Beatrice chapter 17 . 4/21/2019 UPDATE PLESAAASSEEEEEEE |