This was definitely a pleasantly surprising good read! It's just short enough where it keeps your attention the entire time, but still long enough where it doesn't feel like anything needs to be added to better it! It's also very well written, with easy flowing transitions as time passes between the Louigan relationship. And the Gene perspective aspect of it was a nice little touch! Overall, a sweet, short (but not too short) read for those Louigan shippers with a few minutes to spare!

Did you update this story or something? It says you did, but I don't see anything besides what you wrote last time (which was good, btw). Is there another chapter that's just not showing up, or did you just edit the first?
Just asking.

I love how real and relatable you keep Louise and Logan's blossoming love story. The little favours he does for her are quite sweet...still room in their lives for the kind of chaos they attract though. Good work.

So awesome! You did a great job summarizing Louise and Logan's romance story. And Gene's perspective made it unique. I also appreciated the humorous undertones.
Any chance we can get a full story on the wedding itself? The chaos (in detail) sounds hilarious.

Lmao, this was great!

Dude this story was sweet and I really liked it! Also I thought the characters were on point XD