I must confess that I really enjoy your writing style. It's giving just enough description to make me picture what's happening and how stuff looks like, but it isn't weighting down the plot. It's a good fic

Yo Urskek leaders, you guys are LESS pure then ever! Do these bitches seriously not realize that every living being has these feelings? You ain't pure if you continue to constantly bottle up emotions! Certain emotions like rage can be seen as bad yes, but if you express it in a healthy way like writing or venting out on a punching bag then no one gets hurt. All of this coming from a human. For real, the Urskek leaders in this story are major dumbasses.

mentions snow in the Shadows novel,but perhaps its a slip of the author,to use a human line like "snow in summer "

Ohh, my sides! SkekSil just couldn't help himself did he? I don't know who I feel more sorry for: SkekTah or SkekUng.

Ouch geez! Gruesome what they did to SkekMal. But at least SkekTah revealed he can be dangerous if provoked enough the grouch (SkekUng) is gonna remember that one for a very long time.

I like that story too

Figures SkekOk (or as my sister and I call him: Eight eyes) would be the one to leave SkekTah to do the dirty work then make fun of him the next morning.